[Report This]Date: January 21 2023 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think this might be the best story I've read on the site thus far. I love the opening chapter - sets the stage for everything. I really like all the characters and their descriptions. The pacing for each chapter was excellent. The finall chapter sets up for a variety of end possibilities. I wonder if the author will finish it off - if not, I would like to take a crack. Regardless, very well done Duggernaut and I hope you complete this someday.
[Report This]Date: March 28 2021 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't believe I only JUST read this. Pretty great story, it's a shame it seems to have stopped right when it was really getting interesting.
Reading the other responses there seems to be a retooling that was also in the works? I'm awfully curious what that would have been like. Either way, what's here is top class anyways, kept me on the edge of my seat.
Date: June 22 2016 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just read this story over again to catch up on what is going on.
I forgot that there is another Tom in this story. (I love it when there is a Tom in your stories.)
As I looked over my past reviews, I noticed how much I pressed on for Mo to be with Miss Mackenzie. Now since Elisha has him, now I want Tom to be her plaything. After all, she has limited options for him.
Sly had his sister to watch him, but Tom needs some adult supervising, and I think you are hinting at Miss Mackenize. Maybe he is already her prisoner. (I hope.)
I forgot how fun this story is becuase it's a mystery of sorts and Mo is like a detective, learning things from the inside (of the girls.)
I can't wait for you to come back to this story.
Author's Response:
Hey Tom, throwing in a character named Tom is just my way of saying thanks for all your continued support and dedication to following along. I am overhauling this story fairly significantly, almost to the point where I'm considering removing this version and relaunching it, for now, I'll just go in and revamp it it. If there are somne complaints I can always put it out as a revised/improved version of this. We'll see. Still a fair ways to go before this one will be tackled. I might put Nick back out in the interim.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2015 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Another great chapter.
For some reason, Silke just doesn't seem as intimidating as the other Graces.
I'm asking the same thing. Where is Tom and Sly. Of course, she avoids the question by using her body as a distraction.
Each girl does the same thing. Kiss him, then lick him, breast play and then dips in the vagina. Perhaps, these Graces could mix up their routine a bit.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: September 28 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
@ TomSpeedy I tried copy and paste each time, it won't let me do it. Thank you for mentioning it though. On a side note, I just noticed you have a story posted. I'll have to check it out.
Date: September 26 2015 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
@Dark Writer, I have had similar issues and usually when it says "I am not allowed to perform this function", I would scroll down and copy my review. If it's not there, then I click the back button and it should show up for you to copy it. Then I re-login to the site and paste my review that I copied and then I submit it. (I submit reviews through my phone. Not sure how it works on a computer. Might be the same.)
Author's Response:
Thanks for popinting out how to get around it tom!
Date: September 24 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks. I've enjoyed the exchange with you, and look forward to further contact when I next review one of your storie.
T
Author's Response:
Me as well, thank you for taking the time, :)
Date: September 22 2015 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
My preferences are in the area of the Gentle Giantess nature, furry stories involving non-human characters, Tolkien-world races, etc. Whether Science-Fiction or Fantasy, is unimportant to me: a good read, whether it involves sex or not, but without cruelty for its own sake, holds me fascinated right to the end. I'm not really into evil characters, or evil for its own sake, since I've seen my share of such to a greater degree than I ever care to experience again.
Anything that reeks of adventure, new experiences that can be educational, or life-building, are welcome. I find stories that involve interaction, on at least a neutral basis, are fascinating, especially since different writers have different views on how such things would play out. I no longer care for 'hack & slash', 'full speed ahead and damn the torpedoes', 'foot-kissing', 'ass-kissing', and other self-destructive acts in the same degree as I might have in my distant youth.
Since that leaves a whole world of options to be seen & experienced, I'm still pretty wide open to what's available. Does that help to define my interests?...
Author's Response:
Yes, thank you very much for taking the time to share your preferences. I agree with your notion of cruelty for cruelty sake is typically vulgar and unappealing. As a literary device to create a thoroughly repugnant antagonist deserving of whatever fate befalls that character it can be useful. Self destructive acts while not limited to the folly and frivolity of youth appear quite frequently in many tales here and I myself have employed such to push characters down certain story threads. Again please allow me to thank you for sharing and I hope to be able to craft stories that provide enough substance to be worthy of being read. D
Date: September 21 2015 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
I thought it was very good. It is not my usually preferred type of story, but I enjoy almost every well-written story, and this was quite enjoyable.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I too have come across stories not necessarily my taste but with superior writing that elevates the quality of the read. Thank for taking the time to share you thoughts. I'm curious what type of stories do you tend to gravitate toward?
Date: September 05 2015 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love how head cheerleader Susannah just tips her head back and swallows Len then pats her stomach. Having Morris see Susannah's throat actually passing Len along is great. Makes one wonder if after school games Susannah ever swallows cheerleading squads or entire sports teams {perhaps both} from rival schools to have gulped Len down so easily. Will Morris get to hear Susannah digest Len throughout the school day {possibly as her belly button jewel / ring}
Are Elisha and Kimber also into swallowing their playthings, or do they prefer using them for other purposes considering their large breasts and shapely butts? Do the girls have different interests at all? Even though Susannah swallowed her tiny snack, do any of the girls prefer slaves, worshippers, bra or panty prisoners, living toe rings, trained pets?
If any of the school nerds were to find out these girls can shrink people, would they have the courage to ask, even beg to be shrunk for use by the girls? For that matter, would Morris? It makes one wonder.
Please keep up the great work. Whatever direction you take this story, I'm sure from what you have already it will be terrific. Thanks for writing this!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for following this story too Dark Writter. Again you bring some very interesting possibilities to the story and you've given me some ideas to play with. We'll see the proclivities of each of the girls before this story reaches it's end.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2015 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Whoa! Whoa! Another story?!! Not that it's a bad thing, I just feel surprised, like you all ready got enough on your plate.
I'm curious. How did you get the title "Bang your head?"
What a first chapter! Defiantly an attention grabber and it's bound to be popular! I just have that feeling.
The funny part is that I clicked on this story because of the interesting summary. I never even knew it was you writing it! Now that I know, I can be sure it's going to be a good story!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom yup another story and you may be right, finish one start three more might be a bit much especially with school starting back up so updates will probably not be as frequent.
Bang Your Head is in reference to a 1983 song by Quiet Riot called Metal Health but alternatively called bang your head. Seeing as Mo is a pot/metal head I just thought it was a cool play. I have altered the title to include Mo's Story.
Hopefully this story will be received as you anticipate but we'll see. Enjoy!
[Report This]Date: September 04 2015 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start, was rooting for them shrinking a girl but no worries.
Author's Response:
Still lots of time :)