Date: October 07 2015 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoying the story very much. Love the dollhouse from their point of view. Will they feel an earthquake?
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, it is abot to get real, and yep, they're going to feel it!
Date: October 05 2015 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
This appears to be another outstanding contribution to my entertainment! I'm really looking forward to the interactions between Elaine and Sam. Will Sam be the same kind of character as Jack Dalton... an unforgettable character, who is not only respected by other men, but attractive to women? Especially those with power...
What I've seen so far leads me to believe that this will be one of your best yet! Keep up the good work.
Thanks for that...
Tigernach
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, yes I want Sam to possess characteristics similar to Jack, alpha male, self confident and very appealing to women of power, calm and cool under pressure (as we've seen in the bank, a bullet hole in his side). I would dare say man candy, but given the nature of the story and the direction it's taking, that could be dangerous, :)
Date: September 28 2015 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is great and all. But will we see another chapter of the contract soon that is a great story
Author's Response:
Because you asked for it, I jumped back on the contract and check it out. Been awhile I know, no excuses, I need to finish that bad boy - Jack Dalton is a fun character to write.
[Report This]Date: September 27 2015 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story man... Enjoying it so far. Hope that there will be more stuff around her butt though :)
Thanks for the story!! It's really awesome. Well written
Author's Response:
Thanks for the props. If not Elayne's butt, there definitely needs to be a little backdoor action, we shall see soon enough!
Date: August 27 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm liking what I'm reading. And I'm okay with the plot-building and character-introdutions in the beginning. I feel like those are really what makes a story good.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent chapter notes. That way no one has to ask for it right away.
Oooh! A robbery! Do you know what this reminds me of? The contract! The robbery scene of that house was soooo good that it got my attention. I loved the sneakiness of that scene.
This one is similar and it involves a lot of people, including hostages. Reminds me of the movie "The Town". Good movie.
Let me guess, that woman going to get the first aid kit will be taken hostage, then she shrinks everyone, and then she robs them, and uses them for pleasure, thanking them for all the money. Then the woman crushes one of them, puts his blood on her, and comes out to the public claiming that she killed the robbers and escaped. The city congratulates her, and during this whole time, the other 3 robbers are on different parts of her body. The end.
Lol, just a guess, but I can't wait for the next chapter!