Date: January 14 2016 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 12: Proof in the Pudding
Enjoying the story. More Ms.Evans.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
She'll appear again in the planned sequel.
Date: October 23 2015 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 12: Proof in the Pudding
Excellent chapter, I kinda hope Heather takes him home to "hangout" and have more fun *wink wink*
Author's Response:
Possible, though there are other people who'd prefer to take Tom home instead.
Date: October 23 2015 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 12: Proof in the Pudding
What a frustrating end to this chapter - Just when it was getting to the good part!
Author's Response:
The good part will be carried on in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 12: Proof in the Pudding
Great stuff my good man.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 22 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 12: Proof in the Pudding
Who needs enemies with acquainances like Heather?
Author's Response:
Tom's probably just grateful to have people calling him a friend.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2015 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 12: Proof in the Pudding
Why do I have the feeling that he is going to die? I don't want him to, but it just has that feel to it.
I wonder if she can feel Tom on her tongue. Seems like some thick pudding, and she might not tell where he is.
This is tricky, because Heather needs to use more force from her tongue to move the pudding, but she has to be gentle with Tom.
Maybe Tom grows inside her mouth. Perhaps that is how she will find him.
Gooey chapter, talk about a tasty treat for Heather.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I guess we'll find out by the end of this. You're right that it's probably tough to find Tom in there, but Heather knows what she's doing.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2015 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 12: Proof in the Pudding
With friends like Heather, he's better off with just acquaintances.
Author's Response:
Probably true.