Date: October 18 2015 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
Lol! I was referring to Heather.
Author's Response:
Hehe. I figured. Heather is well aware they'd prefer she shut up, but has no intentions of doing it.
Date: October 18 2015 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
The emotional sadism in this story just keeps getting... better? worse?
I love it, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I like to think it's a combination of better and worse. Thanks for reading!
Date: October 17 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
Excellent chapter, I'm interested to see what Heather has planned ofr the little liar.
Author's Response:
We'll see quite soon. Thanks for reading.
Date: October 17 2015 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
I literally made an account just to say how much I like this story so far, great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks for doing that. Glad you're liking the story.
[Report This]Date: October 17 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
The old saying "With friends like these, who needs enemies?", comes to mind when looking at how Heather treats Tom.
Seeing as she's the first in this story to make him shrink so much and intentionally.
I'm wondering what he gets out of this friendship is all i'm saying.
Anyway, another great chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response:
Part of it is that he enjoys not being degraded by Heather. She enjoys playing with him, but not telling him he's a lesser person. There are still some character details being withheld on Tom though that we'll get later on.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
Love the story but hoping there is girl liar at some point as well.
Author's Response:
Maybe in a future story. ;)
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
This chapter seemed so sick to me at the end, where Heather pretty much shrunk Tom down to 1/4 inch herself. It just seemed so... wrong.
Phonomeonal chapter though.
Author's Response:
There's plenty in this world that would probably seem incredibly sick and wrong to anyone in ours. And we'll definitely see even more later on. Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
Some beeyotches just don't know when to shut up. ;-)
Author's Response:
He'll learn eventually. Or maybe not.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
I agree that Tom is an idiot, because he should know how to redirect a question and say things that do not necsarily answer the question, so that way he cannot lie.
Instead of
Date: October 16 2015 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
In a world like this, you'd think people would understand the importance of just shutting the fuck up. Don't want to lie? Then don't fucking talk. Tom's an idiot of the highest caliber. Like "in the corner with a dunce cap on" level of idiocy.
Of course if he isn't an idiot, then that just reinforces my theory that he just really likes being small.
Author's Response:
Hehe. Well, it does have to be remembered that Tom is a compulsive liar. So saying these things is a bodily impulse. We'll hear more about the reasoning for all this though later on.