Date: October 07 2015 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
Oy vey... you ever gonna fix the tagline to your story?
Hint: (defet)
Author's Response:
Thought I already changed it but I'll do that ASAP. Thanks for letting me know.
Date: September 30 2015 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
Ouch, so small but so deadly! Hang in there Jessica!
Author's Response:
Yep size isn't everything.
Date: September 23 2015 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
So it starts, Omega's evil plan and already our heroes are trapped.
Author's Response:
INDEED!
Date: September 16 2015 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
Jessica's first encounter with Omega only she doesn't know it yet. Dawn will be starting school soon and I hope it goes well.
Author's Response:
Everything will come to pass soon
[Report This]Date: August 27 2015 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
I wonder if Dawn is a difficult child? Because if she is then leaving Tucker alone with her could be dangerous, just saying. I've met little kids that would destroy their parents during a tantrum if they had the strength to, and Dawn goes far beyond just "more strength" in comparison to her normal human father. Anyway, I'm looking forward to this one, it's not a prequel so I have no excuses not to read it.
Author's Response:
Well Dawn might be relatively well behaved, we'll have to see. Prequels aren't all that bad.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
Just a quick question-
How long will it take for you to update another chapter?
Also I forgot to rate in the previous review.
Author's Response:
It'll be a week before the next chapter is released. That's the rate that I write and thanks for the rating.
Date: August 26 2015 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
Wow. I loved it!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you do.
Date: August 26 2015 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
Nice start, a lot of catching up and it seems Jessica is only getting stronger too!
Author's Response:
Well intense training will do that to a girl.