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Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2016 1:36 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

Alright, so I'm completely wrong about Wayne. If he did create the angels you would think that the goddess would want him dead. If I was in her shoes I wouldEliminate the guy would could potentially find a weakness.

Now it seems that either Persephone's daughter wants Sidney to be happy or she wants to know more about her mother.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2015 12:49 AM Title: Chapter Twelve

These chapters are written so well. I love is story so much.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2015 9:06 AM Title: Chapter Twelve

Wait so Wayne created the Angels? Does that mean Angels are a fairly recent thing? I got the impression from this story that the Angels have been around for a long time, but if Wayne created them then it must all be fairly recent. And like I said before, why wasnt some kind of killswitch implemented? I would think that would be one of the top priorities when developing such powerful weapons that have minds of their own. Anyway good chapter!



Author's Response:

Q: Wait so Wayne created the Angels?

A: Not exactly. Not alone is what I mean. There are others who collaborated. More on this in the next chapter.

Q: Does that mean Angels are a fairly recent thing?

A: This will be elaborated upon in the next chapter. In short, no. That's if you class a couple of decades as 'recent'. I can't remember if I mentioned how many years the humans have been fighting them. Just because Wayne created created then that doesn't mean that they are 'fairly recent', as you say. Wayne is approaching old age.

Q: Why wasn’t some kind of kill-switch implemented?

A: You have to remember Wayne is withholding information, at least until he gets what he wants. They may be a kill-switch or they may be a different way to kill them. Or Wayne could simply be lying about knowing how to kill Eris.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter Twelve

 Althea is childish but dangerous, very dangerous! Wayne and Tom have some sibling issues there, wonder if it will be covered?



Author's Response:

I plan to cover sibling issues. But to what extent I don't know. I suppose Althea is dangerous. But she's fun!

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