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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter Ten

I wonder if Persophone would carry out that threat if he died? She's shown to not kill humans for useless reasons and to me killing humans to somehow punish someone who's dead is not a good reason to kill them. Anyway, the rest of the chapter was pretty good, although it kind of seems like you're stalling with the mission, every time I think: this is the chapter where he's going on it, it's pushed back by another fanservice/character chapter like this one...

Not that I don't aprechiate these chapters, mind you, but I just think that Sidney needs a chance to do something awesome to prove himself first so that Persophone's attention is more realistic. Right now, it's as you say: they barely met and he hasn't done anything for her cause yet. Also, and I guess I can't blame him, but Sidney really does think with his dick sometimes doesn't he? At least break up with you're GF or something if you want to be with Persophone in that way, you know? Then again, she's not really giving him much choice, is she?

Great chapter then, I'm eagerly awaiting the next one, and also awaiting the chance to see Sidney really prove his worth!

 



Author's Response:

A few points:

Persephone like Sidney pysyically, although already knows Sidney is competant because she mentioned humans she and Nyx have cpatured in the past talking about Sidney. And also he was reccomended by Wayne. But remember, Persephone could be using her body to get what she wants out of Sidney. It's not as simple as her giving him attention just for the sake of it. He's male and she's female and she can, and will, use his penis against him.

Whether or not it's fanservice is debatable. Well to me anyway. I want to develop the relationships. Maybe there are elements of fanservice but I wouldn't say it's just purely for fanservice. I don't view any of the characters as fanservice characters as they are all necessary for the story. Even if I had giant men, there's no guarantee I wouldn't use them for fanservice too. But the overwhelmingly male audience at Giantess World wouldn't appreciate it I'm sure. “It's called GiantESS World therefore no giant males” is a lame thing to say in my opinion.

Nostory assured me having more interaction (you refer to it as fanservice) would get more people reviewing. That hasn't happened so far, but that's fine because I enjoyed writing this chapter. I'm not saying you, or anyone, should blame Nostory though. Nostory has been valuable to this story. But this is a fetish story after all. I assure you the next chapter will what you want. Sidney will prove himself, I assure you.

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