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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 02 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 21

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

An egotistical hard rock band gets taken down (quite) a few notches, both emotionally and literally. And only the front man gets to remember. I love it!

I'm confused by one thing, though. Did Vogel really suffer permanent damage? Or was that just a misprint?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 21

I really liked this chapter, but I think it's too soon. I think there should be one more chapter with Amanda should've finished her sex scene with Pete, then she says something like "sweet dreams little one" to end that chapter. Then this chapter should be after that.

Good ending, but it felt random. Did not expect the ending that soon.

I can't wait for your next story.(or for more progress on your other stories.)

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