[Report This]Date: October 21 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
Charlie has been caught! Only Pete left! (And the bus driver.)
No Anna! You cannot take seconds until Amanda plays with her toy.
That cliffhanger!!!!!! Amanda has to get Pete! Please let it happen. Also, I hope she actually keeps Pete and doesn't give him away to a little girl. All the girls have their toys already. It's time for the real woman to have some fun!
Karli is already backing off, meaning, she is not interested in playing yet. However Amanda is, and Angeline is nowhere in sight.(unless she has to bus driver.) Wouldn't it be funny if the buss driver was Angeline's husband? Haha. This would be a great setup hosted by Karli.
Ok, now I really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter! ("Reallys" mean give this story priority.) I can't wait!
Date: October 21 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter! Right now this one is my second favorite of your stories, Bang your Head would be first, but this story is still really good!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2015 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
The hunt is almost over. Three down/one to go!
Which reminds me...I feel tempted to say these girls should form their own rock group: The Berkshire Hunt Club! But, I don't think your British readers would appreciate the joke. ;-)