Date: October 18 2015 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
Were you paraphrasing the moral of "Amok Time" in your response?
[Report This]Date: October 13 2015 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
Alright, I'm very much enjoying this story mate. It's great to see that it's still going strong :)
I'm probably more taken with this one because I think the set up reminds me a lot of your previously completed story: 'Double dog dare' Another story where a group of four (five if you count the driver) are caught playing an epicly proportioned game of Cat & Mouse ^_^
I'm also enjoying it because it includes a range of distinguished shrunken cast members too with respective personalities. My favorite I'd have to say so far is Charlie, the smart guy with his head on straight. Here's hoping he gets an enjoyable experience despite being the not-so-popular drummer ^_^;
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, there have been a few others that link this story to Double Dog Dare. I think with multiple characters with different personalities can keep it fresh and appealing. the cat and mouse is always a favorite, heightens the sense of playfulness. I wanted Charlie to be the laid back dude, we'oll see how he fares in forthcoming chapters.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2015 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well, since those two are done, the other girls will come in.
I wonder who will get who. I can't wait for Amanda's turn.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Amanda may have a lot of pent up frustration, might have to demonstrate that when she, if she gets her hands on one of the little guys, :)
[Report This]Date: October 12 2015 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
Be careful what you wish for, Aedin. You might get it.
Author's Response:
Wanting and having, two entirely different realities