[Report This]Date: October 08 2015 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well, I like to keep them (my reviews) short and sweet, Tom. As I'm often paranoid that I'll be over-analyzing why I liked the latest chapter of this-or-that. Which, of course, can kill somebody else's enjoyment of same!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
Eddie and Aedin down. 2 or actually 3 left. We still don't know anything about the bus driver.
Karli is patiently waiting as well as Amanda. I bet Amanda really wanted to use Aeiden as well. It must have taken guts to give him back. Sure, she promised him to Daphne, but I have a feeling Amanda will have her turn.
How about Angelica? What about her. Is she with the bus driver? Is the bus driver Angelica's husband? Does Angelica have like 10 little men in her room? She seems like someone who stashes men.
You know that feeling when you see a woman, sometimes smiling, and you wonder, what if there's a tiny man inside her panties. Then you look down, you see no bump, then you wonder, is the man completely inside? Then you reconsider this, and think, no, it's just a fantasy. But you wish....
I get that feeling when I pass some women here and there. Sometimes I feel like there are unusually happy like they have a secret, a sexy special secret.
Anyway, before I get carried away, I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2015 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
Gives new meaning to the term "aria-ola."
;-D
Date: October 07 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
Its a little odd how Aedin was desperately running away at first and then all of a sudden switched to horny gentleman mode. Not that I'm complaining about the fanservice we're getting but the transition here was abit jarring.
Author's Response:
Daphne tricked Aedin by engaging his passion singing which in turn made it more personal for him unlike Anna who simply slammed Eddie. That was kind of my thinking as I was writing it. I might have to retool the chapter to try and express his feelings a little more clearly. Thanks