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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 15

Kinda short and not much happened but I did enjoy the conversation! I'm looking forward to the next one!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read, just a little bridge. This one is starting to heat up though, :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 15

Better and better, with each chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 15

Well, look at that. I'm not the only one playing the match ups game. Charlie is thinking this out too.

This chapter showed me that Charlie is more like the Dustin of the group. He shows more intellect unlike Pete who can't seem to grasp this situation.

I don't even think Eddie knows what's going on despite being fucked like a dildo.

Charlie makes a good point. What happened to the bus driver and Angelica? Did get together because we hanvent seen them for while?

My bet is that it's Celeste that shows up to these guys. She's the girl who wasn't with Anna when she found Eddie. Daphne and Amanda went to search with Karlie, Angelica is with Gus(I think) so that leaves Celeste. Makes sense, right?

I think so, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Charlie is in survival mode, 2+2= guys out of there depth, :-0

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