Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

GOOD ONE! :-D

Author's Response:

Not bad I must admit. I thought of myself as particularly clever in another stroy where the lead character (pothead) is stalked by two young females in that i entitled the chapter, two birds, one stoner. tee-hee

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 14

Near the beginning, you said "supporting his head with a head". I think you meant hand. I was tempted not to point it out because it sounds funny.

Goodness, Anna is aggressive. She went on overdrive or something. Wow.

Haha, Eddie was like "the things I'm going to do to you", like what? What can you do against Anna, she can barely feel you. Like Amanda said, you better beware of Anna. Well, this is the reason.

Amanda knows that her own daughter is experienced in sex and aggressive despite her cute, timid behaviour. If Anna was this powerful, I wonder why did Amanda even show up to assist her. Anna could defiantely take of herself on her own. I bet Amanda is just here for the fun. I would love to see her get a tiny.

If Anna gets Eddie, and Daphne gets Aedin, who gets the rest. We got Celeste, Amanda, Karli, and Angeline. Also, we have Pete, Charlie, and the bus driver. 4 girls, 3 guys? How does this match up? Also, what happened to the bus driver? Is he already caught?

For anal insertion, I noticed you always make the guy go 90% in and never completely inside. (Exception was the one guy from Double dare story.) I would love to see Eddie go fully immersed, but at least he went in head first, so it's alright.

This reminds me of the hunt from the contract and a hunt from that other story when Hilde told a guy to hide. (You have a lot of stories now, that I'm starting to forget some.)

My favorite woman is still Amanda so, I will cheer once she gets her man. I know she might not get hers until the girls get theirs, but until then I cannot wait!

I also cannot wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Knowing what was coming was only serving to get these girls hot and wet. Eddie has been playing into it and she just had to have him. The others in the house will begin to pair off.