[Report This]Date: September 21 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
And, now the real fun (???) begins.
Author's Response:
Fun is probably a matter of perspective I suppose. We'll see how fantasy and reality aren't necessarily always aligned.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
Now this I partly expected. I knew the girls were in on it, but I never knew that Karli was the one who shrank her. I also knew that Karli would reveal her playful side and she also has an interest in Aedin.
Now about that shriek. My bets on Eddie. He wanted to be caught and now is his chance. Time for the fun to roll in!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Trying to 'set the stage' as it were. Karli is an intermediary who facilitated this scenario. Depending how it turns out we'll see if she mixes business with pleasure.
Date: September 21 2015 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, and here I thought Karli was actually kind of a nice person, strict, but nice. But then she goes and takes advantage of people that trusted her for financial gain! What a horrible woman. And did she just say "if you survive"? Of course nobody will ever believe them if they somehow managed to grow back and call the authorities. Then again, if the band were to be killed or kept by the women I'm sure after enough time passed, it would arouse suspicion in them, after all they were the last people who had contact with them and this IS a popular band we're talking about here. I wonder if the woman that lives in this house was also in on it? Anyway's at least the explanations are out of the way and we KNOW for a fact that the women were scheming this all along. Now we can get to the good parts!
Author's Response:
Hurricane makes for an easy way to get rid if the band :O