[Report This]Date: September 17 2015 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG man what a great chapter a bit of a tease where you left off but an awesome way to add suspence.. Thanks for another great chapter :)
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Band on the run :)
[Report This]Date: September 17 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
Charlie's right about the potential sell-out. I've always told anyone who would grudgingly listen that I would gladly VOLUNTEER(!) for the life sentence Jeannie Brunette wanted to give Major Nelson in part three of "Genie, Genie, Who's Got The Genie?".
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Yep
[Report This]Date: September 17 2015 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ok, I think all the women know. There's a little too many mentions of tiny and toy going on.
I'm with Eddie now. (Usually I'm against him.) I would take advantage of this whole situation.
I like the laid back Karli. She seems so peaceful and controlling. I also like the eager Amanda. It makes this whole even exciting.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: September 17 2015 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
It's hard to tell whether the girls know about the shrinking or not. You've been kinda vague with the way they are speaking, they haven't said the key word "shrink" yet. They DID say "toy" but then again a woman can say that about a normal sized man too.