[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 6
Really great story so far! For some reason most stories that take this long to get to the GTS content lose my interest but you have a good cast of characters here that helps keep me drawn in. Aedin especially seems like a good man despite his flaws, he doesn't look down on women, he doens't think with his dick, and he's willing to set aside his pride and listen to other people. But at the same time he's got a bit of a mean streak in him, so far, he's my favorite characeter! I'm glad I decided to give this story a try, I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the inevitable GTS content to come!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to hang in there and share a review. We are getting close to the GTS part of the story now, so hopefully it was worth the wait, ;)
[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
Night seems to be approaching. The group getting all cozy.
You said that "Amanda and her mother get a room". Well, I think you made a typo as it should be Anna.
Well, Aedin is going to have some fun, that's for sure. Every girl likes him.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Things are getting ready to go. Thanks for the catch on Amanda and Anna - I get turned around sometimes with too many stories abd repeat character names, but it is all fixed
[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well, Aedin might not be as considerate as Karli. But, he does have the saving grace of being a pragmatist. So, I guess he's not all bad, after all.
Author's Response:
He's just trying to shake off the hangover is all