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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

Shades of Simonetta!

;-)

Author's Response:

For now, :P

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 5

This woman wants to get laid. Angeline might sound nice, but she is going to use them to her advantage somehow. Being alone for all these (I'm guessing) years would make anyone feel delighted to have guests, especially when her eyes longer on the men.

Karli used to be the one in control. Now the power has shifted to Angeline.

Strong grip? Is she someone familiar? Does she happen to have yellow eyes? I'm beginning to suspect some things.....

Haha, Eddie's bunk bed idea. Also, he really wants Anna. He even is openly telling everyone that he likes her. Even Amanda, her mother, knows it.

This chapter Daphne wrapped around Aedin. So Aedin has two followers. Hmm. Wonder who gets him when he shrinks.

Aedin-"we are in a band"
Angeline-"tsk tsk, unbecoming of a young gentlemen" . Angeline thought: "He should be serving me instead."

I'm pretty sure that's what she was thinking.

Similar to Double Dare story, we got another random archaic house that our characters have ventured into and no help is likely to arrive. Although it's repetitive, I enjoy these isolated areas becuase then we know that no bs will interrupt the story. No random dude will go to this house. There won't be neighbors peeking inside. Just a groups of men(or in this case some girls too) and a creepy house with no where to run to.

Looks like this house will be the setting for a while. Now I wonder what will take place in it. Let's find out.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

There are certainly similarities between the dare story and this, but I've got a bit of a twist lined up to separate them. :)

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