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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2015 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

Go West region! I'm rooting for Anna and her mother, Amanda. But seriously, why do all the mothers in your stories are a few inches shorter than her daughters? Perhaps in 'Tom's story' Karolina could be a bit taller. Just a trend I noticed.

This is hilarious. The super hot girl is the one who is under 21 and is followed by her mother. It's like the mom is there just to prevent something sexual. I bet one of these band members will try to isolate Anna and get in touch with her.

Hmm. I guess it won't be a 'Spend a day with Injustice' even after all. A day is too short. Unless, this was supposed to be a short story, but I doubt that.

Let me guess, this 'meal' that they have together; Does this have anything to do with the band shrinking? It seems convincing.

I can't wait for this band to shrink, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hmm never noticed that mother daughter trend though in the Contract Clarissa is taller than both her daughters. I always want to find entertaining and inventive ways for the shrink. The one for this story is almost written and it's one of those "oh you probably shouldn't have done that" moments. Soon as you read it you're going to recognize the play. Eddie is already trying to get to Anna while Daphne is super hot for Aedin. We'll see how long this group remains together intact. Should be fun.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2015 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

Heh! I was half-expecting one of them to be Little Miss Blue-hair. But, I suppose that would've been _too_ predictable.*

*And, no gts/sm tale, worth its salt, should be that.

Author's Response:

Agreed :)

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