Reviews For Fan Girls
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Reviewer: IN54N1TY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2016 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please please please PLEASE write a sequel to this... even if it's only like two chapters that explain her backstory and their time after this story takes place just PLEASE don't let this story just end.

Author's Response:

I am actually working on a parallel story to this one called Fan Boys

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2015 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

@carycomic, Like song, like drummer. Both stuck inside her.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

@carycomic, Drumstick, drumstuck, drumsticky.

Author's Response:

Drumsitcky, made me laugh, :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2015 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

@Carycomic, that was pretty darn good.

Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2015 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very intriguing.

Your wide variety of characters, and in turn, their variety of personalities and agendas is rather entertaining to watch.  I agree with other posters that Aiden is...interesting. I fear for his future.

Nice writing style. Keep it up, man. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading the story and sharing a review. I think it might be wise to be concerned for Aedin I have feeling his life is about to take an interesting turn for the smaller :) 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2015 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Highly interesting! Is this a real-life band...or a semi-fictionalized one (to keep from being sued)?

Author's Response:

All fictitious and easter eggs threaded throughout a bunch of my other stories. I wanted to give them exposure through tom's Story before posting this one.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Of all the characters in this story, I like the random fan girls that showed up. Every man either seemed boring or rude and I wouldn't mind them being shrunk.

I really want Aedin to be shrunk. Passed along from girl to girl as a toy, and perhaps they will force him to sing to them or something similar.

This guy is popular, and I think a size reduction is in order. That ouughta straighten things out.

Another interesting setup. I bet this guy is going to wake up all tiny!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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