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Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2017 8:28 PM Title: Back to School Blues

Love It! I'm happy Tom and Addison finally got some closure.  I still wish she was used more, but I'm glad with how it ended here.



Author's Response:

You have been a champion for Miss Addison for ages now and their parting was brutal with Janine's bullying. I wanted to show Tom was above it and wanted to validate her feelings even if she is a little off center.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2017 6:46 PM Title: Back to School Blues

I like the moment with Miss Addison. She was a big fan of fairies and I remember her "enchanted forest" where Tom said she was obsessed with fairies. Tom made the right decisesion by easing the tension between them with this gift.

Damn Janine. Is she addicted to Tom? I mean, it's hot, but it's starting to feel strange. Sure, first day he is back, go fuck him all you want, but now she does it all the time. Sometimes I wonder if Tom just goes with it. As a tiny, he was forced to obey her. Now he just willingly submits to her.

That Miss Harwood scene felt a little weaker than I wanted. They exchanged a few lines, but I desired more. Maybe he gets caught in detention after school, or she visits him. Flirting is nice, but not enough for closure in my opinion. Especially with Janine dominating the stage right now, I want a little more from Katie.

Maybe next chapter could be "Not so fast" where Miss Harwood pulls him into her room as he walks by and she ties him up to chair or even the floor. Maybe "Final exam" where Miss Harwood does her tricks on a normal sized Tom. Miss Harwood should get a greater closing moment and since it's Tom's story, you know something like that will happen.

Maybe it doesn't have to be sexual. Perhaps, Miss Harwood schedules some tutoring for Tom with his mom and she approves and both Katie and Tom have a grin.

Well, I hope Katie physically makes Tom's wood hard.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

While I certainly could have written a more descriptive encounter between Katie and Tom, now that he's back to himself the dynamic has shifted much in the same way as Lina and Tom. That said, she was willing to engage in word play with him in front of the class. PS she will always give him hard wood!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2017 11:40 AM Title: Homecoming

That was incredible. I love Janine's desire to take Tom, even though their parents are probably aware of them. It just adds to the thrill of it.

Did Tom always have green eyes? I thought maybe light blue or maybe brown? I don't think it was ever specified until now.

After all of Tom's adventures, it's been a while since he had normal sex. Also, we can see who is naturally a top and bottom with these two.

I absolutely love the scene where she began pressing her thighs forward and lifting her legs over his shoulder, grinning her pubic mound onto his face. Then she forced him to the ground and basically sat on his face. That's sexy.

We need a Miss Harwood scene before this is all said and done. I was hoping for a tiny Tom, but I don't think he will shrink again. Maybe Katie can top Janine. I'm not sure that's possible, but I think Miss Harwood, being more mature has more tricks up her sleeve to make things interesting.

Will Tom go to school and see her, or will she come over for some tutoring? Either way, I would love to see them together again.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I think I'm in love with Janine. There's still just enough of an edge that she is delightful without being a bitch.  Next chapter Back to School so we will.get some miss Harwood and some miss Addison closure. Figured you might like that

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2017 6:56 PM Title: Homecoming

P.S.---Why do I suddenly have a feeling that the moment he goes back to the campus library, to study for this or that make-up test, he's going to shrink again in front of Miss Gaynor the head librarian?

Author's Response:

Wouldn't that be kind of funny?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2017 7:54 AM Title: Homecoming

Home "coming" (lol!).

Love that title.

Author's Response:

Purely accidental... I swear ;)

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2017 9:15 PM Title: Homecoming

Woo hoo!  Party at Janine's place!  Again!

It's really great to see these two get together fianally.  Ya gotta love love.  Super romantic and sexy...what a great scene.

Awesome payoff Duggernaut.  Worth the wait. 

 

pix



Author's Response:

After all the things that have happened in this story it harkens back to chapter one when Tom says he's fated to be with her well in her panties anyway

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2017 2:52 PM Title: Tom's Story

I hope we get to see Miss Addison again before this is all over. I really wish you had used her more.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2017 4:20 AM Title: Back to Normal...

Hmm. I was thinking that since Tom is most likely going to have fun with Janine soon, the dream could have been about Miss Harwood.

If that was me, that's what the dream would be about. Miss Harwood is number one, then Janine is probably next. Lina and Cassidy are up there too. Not to mention that new woman on the plane earlier. But Miss Harwood is at the top for me, and I'm thinking that hopefully Tom gets a dream with Katie, or maybe meet her.

Well, I guess it makes since these two were sexting each other.

With the plane ride being so long, are Lina and Tom going to fuck on the plane? Lina explained how she couldn't go after him like she used to, it since Janine is not there, and they have nothing to do, I'm thinking why not.

Good point about being claustrophobic. When you are shrunk, there is all this space around you. Then as a normal person, you feel restricted, less freedom and it doesn't help to be on a small plane too.

That doctor wanted to "study" him some more. Yeah, we all know what she was thinking.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2017 7:22 PM Title: Back to Normal...

Whoa! I don't think there's ever been a Mile High Club with only a...single member. ;-)

Welcome back from summer vacation, Dug. And thanks for the arousing new chapter.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2017 6:57 PM Title: Back to Normal...

Dang!  I hope Tom hasn't joined the messed up for life club.

If dream Janine is like that, what is the real deal gonna deliver?

Good stuff Duggernaut. Thanks for sharing this.

pix

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2017 12:53 PM Title: Back in Friendly Territory

This feels like a good climax, so I think the best thing to do now would be to write the denouement and epilogue. Anything else can go into a spin-off.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2017 1:39 PM Title: Back in Friendly Territory

Whoa! Not so fast! While Tom may have grown back, I'm not ready for that. I want him tiny again. Hopefully someone created another version of Tom Sr's invention.

Also, we need a Katie Harwood reunion before this is all said and done. Hopefully, Tom gets tiny in her hands.

With Mrs. Green in the picture, I would love to hear more teases from her too. She should meet Miss Harwood and talk about Tom.

How is Tom Sr doing? Did he make a tiny portable shrink ray? While the story seems to be going to end on a good note, I also want it to end it on a sexy note as well. That's what I would envision how Tom's story would end.

We still need those 1000 reviews too. Maybe a few more chapters could achieve this goal. Sex sells, more fun with Tom and more people will love it. The question is how will the fun transition to the end.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2017 10:28 PM Title: Back in Friendly Territory

Whew! What a cliff-hanger!

I especially agree with that last sentence, whole-heartedly. The question is: will he get that sleep?

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2017 7:08 PM Title: Back in Friendly Territory

Oh my gosh!  I can't believe how relieved I am.  Tom is restored and now we can see how he's grown as a person, yes I went there.  But really, that's what it has always been about as I've read this.  The characters have really made this piece and Tom's situation has been a fascinating catalyst for change and for revelation.  I really want to see what happens now. 

Awesome work Duggernaut.

 

pix

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2017 8:01 AM Title: Snatched

Very good long running story. Long time reader and this is my first post. I have a plot suggestion for the story. When Mrs. Green and Tom land at the airport they are intercepted by crooked airport security and customs agents who have been tipped off, and paid off by the Russians. Knowing that she is going to be detained for several hours, have her belongings confiscated and searched, stripped nude, and even cavity searched, Mrs. Green takes a drastic measure to smuggle Tom into the country. She takes out a minitature atmospheric diving suit puts Tom into it it and swallows him. Those diving suits can withstand extreme pressure and have enough air to last almost 2 days. She smuggles him back almost like a drug mule, by swallowing him and having him pass through her body. Meanwhile we get things from Tom's perspective as he goes on his "fantastic voyage" through her digestive system unharmed. He's been on, and inserted in, women's bodies, now he gets to go through one.

It's an interesting concept, Tom has been swallowed by women twice so far in the story, not staying in the stomach for long, and even anally inserted several times. With a scenario like this he can get swallowed, spent a long inside her, go through her, and not die, while being smuggled in on his way to freedom in the one place the bad guys can't check. The suit could also be used in later chapters for protection for kinky play since he would probably be allowed to keep it since it factor into the paid for expenses of retrieving him. 



Author's Response:

A very very interesting concept...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2017 10:20 AM Title: Tom's Story

Duggernaut!

Happy 2 year anniversary with this story!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2017 1:23 AM Title: Snatched

One of the hottest teasing chapters in this story!

This woman has perfect flirtation game! It's on point and relentless. She throws all these jokes/references and teases him all at the same time. I don't know any of these references, but they seem very clever to make Tom even feel outmatched.

Is this Mrs. Smith or Mrs. Green? Felt like 1 woman with 2 names. Maybe I missed soemthing? You changed the name halfway thru.

This woman talks dirty and I love how she was first making it clear that she wasn't interested in him, and then slowly shared her thoughts to Tom about maybe reconsidering. I love it when woman think about stuff like this. Either they say it aloud like this, or it's mentioned what they are thinking.

Even though it's been about 1 chapter, this woman is arguably my 2nd favorite giantess. She is basically a female version of Tom. She seems horny and makes teasing jokes that are great for flirting. And she talks dirty!

All alone on a private jet. Mile high club anyone? This scene can easily lead to something erotic.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Sorry about the Mrs. Green/Mrs. Smith thing. I had origianlly had Hedy with a different last name, but changed it. I have since fixed it. Mrs. Green is very playful, thought you might like her!

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2017 8:57 PM Title: Snatched

Miss Smith has some style.  I like her even more now.  She has a natural bit of curiousity and Tom didn't really give her the full Tom Treatment, but she didn't dive on him like (insert hungry cat reference here.) 

Of course, story's not over yet...heh heh.

Nice stuff Duggernaut, we really get a look at Tom's level of fatigue without him really getting his victim on.  He's the Rocky of living sex toys.

Thanks Duggernaut,

pix

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2017 8:42 PM Title: Snatched

Next chapter: "The Vagina Dialogue."

Sorry! Couldn't resist. ;-D

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2017 9:16 PM Title: Ekaterina

Hmm. I think this is the spy. Being a short woman may make others think she is no threat.

I think this woman pretended to be still and surprise! She knocked him out and is planning on escaping with him.

Her curiosity story to me is just an act. She wants Tom weak, vulnerable and for him to trust her.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

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