[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 10:15 PM Title: Catlike Reflexes
101. Cat like reflexes.
Okay...uh...that was pretty intense.
And it kind of seemed real.
....Did you know it was possible to survive jumping off the golden gate bridge?
It is. Your odds aren't good, like 2 percent, so don't try it. And besides, you aren't suicidal. But, do you know what 100 percent of the people attempting suicide describe the second they let go of that bridge?
Regret.
Every fucking one of them, they see clearly that they have made a mistake and regret smacks them in the face.
It could be that Janine's actions are an extension of her selfishness, she wants to keep her toy. But wow...you captured that moment. That...not clarity...that moment of overwhelming regret.
I have to admit...I would see Janine as having burned every bridge between her and Tom. Litterally being, at best, the embodiment of Depraved Indifference (willing to use him to the point of his death...infact revelling in the idea) is a pretty black mark against her.
But wow, what a moment....
I'm not going to hold my breath to see if she can develop anything resembling compassion....so far she doesn't seem to have the toolkit...but maybe she can start with something like guilt...again, not holding my breath.
Of course it could also be this is like the hospital tears...a drug induced (in this case, stress induced) anomolie. I'm really not to prepared to invest in her emotionally, but if she does start to seek some kind of...trip on the road to redemtion...I'd be with her on the journey....
You are an incredible writer...this is so...true. A 10 rating is not high enough.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 9:44 PM Title: Donatella
Chpt 98, Donatella.
To be honest...kind of hard to got with this one.
All that talk of being in a home? How did that come about? Did Tom2 or Mom just let Donatella keep their dad in a cage...kind of ugly.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 9:35 PM Title: Two Giant Birds, One Little Tom
Chpt 96, two giant birds one little tom
Wow, what a way to get closeups in your girl/girl scene
[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 9:08 PM Title: Teacher's Pet
Chpt 83. Teacher's Pet.
Uuuummmm...who, exactly, does the hiring at Sapperton Academy?
Date: March 10 2017 9:00 PM Title: The Wind Up
Chpt 80, the windup
Okay, Lina, I love ya, but you are a total failure as a mother.
No offense.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 8:48 PM Title: Tess
Tess.
Honey.
Thank you.
Ya' know. Ya' just say fuck it and have a go at Tom. I really can't judge you. You've earned it.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 8:45 PM Title: Tess and Janine
Oh for god's sake! Tom, you little dumbass! Cassiy is right there! She's fun, she's hot, she's got that nurse thing (okay, I don't really get the nurse thing) and she's looking out for you.
And the minute she turns up your mind goes to the blonde troll. God. Dumbass.
Here's your very own meme.
Pussy.
Picture of Tom.
Makes you stupid.
Date: March 10 2017 8:39 PM Title: Back Home, Janine Sunday
Chpt 68 Back Home, Janine Sunday
HA! I told you: faking it. Still an evil cunt.
Tess, you're too smart to fall for her bullshit. But you're too nice to let her live with herself if she has changed. God.
I say err on the side of caution. Is knife the bitch still on the table?
Date: March 10 2017 8:32 PM Title: Jess
Chapter 57 Jess.
Yes, Tess, honey: everyone is crazy but you.
Date: March 10 2017 8:30 PM Title: Tom
Wait, what?
Tom is actually being considerate? Of Tess' feelings? Wow dude! Good on ya!
But dude, there's something really wrong with you if you take one nanosecond thinking about Janine's well being. Consider her reaction during the accident the definition of and the best way to end your relationship: "her goodbye piss."
Really dude, grow some self respect.
Date: March 10 2017 8:25 PM Title: Search
Chpt 55. Search.
Not for ONE SECOND do I buy it. She's faking it. She's faked being a human being her whole life, she can fake contrition. Or it's the drugs. She's probably just sorry she lost her "toy."
If Tess got to really give it to...Kidnapper! Slut! Abuser! Liar! Every word hitting her like a hammer blow. I might see something in her reaction. But Tess, (best human being on earth) is too busy thinking of her brother ( and it's not his fault this time) and trying to solve the problem. Wow. Way to go. You are the real hero of this story.
Date: March 09 2017 10:19 PM Title: 911
Chapter 53, 911
Okay, car accident got my hopes up, but the bitch skates again. I dunno, a nice facial scar might add character...maybe some missing limbs.
WTF happened to Tom...probably some sexy nurse or doctor has him in heaven right now.
Poor Tess...
[Report This]Date: March 09 2017 10:08 PM Title: Lazarus
Chapter 50, Lazarus.
Okay, I like Tom enough that it's not worth it to see the bitch choke...but only barely...and only because it would hurt Tess.
So there.
Actually it's good to see Tom actively trying to escape. Making him a more active character really adds to the story.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2017 9:58 PM Title: Backdoor Man
Chapter 47 Backdoor Man.
You know, life has been nothing but kind to this litle bitch. She's had beauty, wealth, security all handed to her on a silver platter. So when life hands her someone completely at her mercy she treats them, litterally, like shit.
What's not to love?
[Report This]Date: March 09 2017 9:52 PM Title: Alpha
See, SW fans agree. "Evil Cunt."
I gotta say, as much as I hate her, Janine's plan was brilliant. She seems to have a firm grasp of "the system."
If she could turn that insight on herself she'd probaly shudder.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2017 9:50 PM Title: The Enchanted Forest
Chapter 40 The Enchanted Forest.
Wait, fairy figures...in her sex chamber? She seems to like Tom's size, but not his charm....hmmm. Miss Addison is...is...an SW fan.
Oh my god. You're using this incredible story to make us SW fans look...look... well, pretty damn good compared to Janine.
Did I get some hint that Tom might be considering Tess' feelings...will wonders never cease.
I find it kind of cute how these women try to humiliate Tom and he just doesn't get it. He's like "you got the pussy, so I'll do what you want." Or if denied a choice he just looks at it through the filter of "I liked that" or "I didn't like that"
Great read so far.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2017 10:09 PM Title: Aftermath
Ha! I was expecting Ella to tell Lina to seduce Tom so he won't think of trying the procedure.
"Lina, could you please distract Tom for me?"
Lina takes Tom to other room and has fun. Well, it looks like Lina will have fun with Tom after all.
Life support? Are you serious? Put gramps in another test so he can take another chance. He is missing out on Dona. You know Dona is going to miss the fun they have. 2 years of fun, and how it's jeapordized. But if Tom Sr doesn't make it, what a way to go! Having sex constantly with Dona for 2 years. Might as well go to heaven.
If I was Tom, I would not try the test. Why lose the fun he has being shrunk. Tom makes it seem like it's a bad thing, but we all know he kind of enjoys it. I would love to be him. Stay shrunken forever, especially being surrounded by beautiful ladies!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: March 08 2017 8:02 PM Title: Aftermath
Masterfully poignant.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2017 7:52 PM Title: Tess
Uh huh...good girls like dumb boys.
That little fucker is gonna get (or be gotten by) every girl in this story.
Sam is naughty...I like her.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2017 7:39 PM Title: Hand Off
And now Tess is going to tell Tom like it is.
And Tom will take her words to heart and actually be a participant in his own fucking survival.
And if you believe that....
I really like how Lina can be so dominant but so sweet at the same time...a well crafted character. Amazing work.