Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 6:54 PM Title: New Digs

The question, though, is: "Who's the guest?" I mean, I think we've already established that Tatiana isn't a knowing accomplice to this latest abduction. And, while a lot of people make jokes about the legal profession (like "criminal lawyer being two different names for the same thing"), I don't see Serena being the double-dealing traitor, here. That is; the one who gave the abductor all the necessary entry codes for the Lindholm Institute (or whatever it's called). Serena strikes me as being 100% loyal to her biggest client. A truly ethical person!

So that leaves two suspects, as far as I can see. Miss Gaynor (the campus librarian from back home)...or Jessica Lindholm, after all.

Author's Response:

Sooo many ways to go, while the notion of the librarian financing the abduction did make me smile, I'll say that's not the case  :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2017 8:49 PM Title: Destination Unknown

P.S.---Okay! So I was wrong about it being Jessica Lindholm. But, now, I'm hoping that I'm equally wrong about Tatiana being a knowing accessory to this crime. Because, I agree with Tom's assessment. The girl proved refreshingly sweet when she had custody of him! As opposed to the domineering narcissist that Janine initially demonstrated herself to be.*

*Emphasis on "initially!"

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2017 1:35 AM Title: Destination Unknown

Actually, they are in a submarine. This woman has a Russian name but that doesn't make her related to Tatiana. Also, this woman actually loves him dearly, but doesn't want Tom to know that.

Janine actually knows where Tom is becuase she put some tracking ship on him while Tom was passed out one night. The reason why they don't give Tom food is so that he will hate them. Tom has been hit with a dart while he was asleep so he didn't remember anything. Smoke bomb was so the regular sized people could see them escape.

It is not a ransom becuase then these women would be forced to treat him well and not damage him. They do intend on keeping him, but we do not know for how long.

However, these women have a stronge fragrance that only tinies can smell very well. So the grandpa Tom will recognize the scent while the other women can't smell it.

Tom Sr has been in many wars, dealing with Russian spies and has traveled accrosss the world and can speak 7 languages. He has been in this same situation before on his adventures before he got rich and then shrunk.

Also, while Tom Sr lost energy during the experiment and is now weak, the boy Tom absorbed the energy and is now slightly radioactive.

If under stress Tom can blow up and destroy everything around him for a 3 mile radius but he will be unharmed. Only Janine can blow Tom up and she can activate Tom whenever she wants.

In addition, Janine also has a retrieve button which teleports Tom inside her vagina. She seduced a scientist to put a tiny teleported in there and can put Tom where he belongs.

Lina is aware of Janine's tracker in Tom, but Lina wants to retrieve Tom herself and gain the respect of Tom's mom again. Also, for the sake of the plot, we will see Serena again for this purpose.

Tom will be safe forever, he is just on another adventure and this drama that Lina and everyone is causing is to scare Tom's mom. It's a fake heist meant to glorify Lina when she gets Tom back.

I looked up Duggernaut's brainstorming notebook and found all this stuff. I thought it was fake, but after reading these last few chapters about these women kidnapping Tom, I think I believe it.

Of course some details found in this chapter don't match up, but I guess Duggernaut changed them. It's impressive how Duggernaut can create and plan such a brilliant plot twist and then alter it in ways that it can still make sense! Amazing!

(I made this review up, or did I?)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Lol, Tom I swear sometimes you make me laugh. this was great! Now begins the odyssey of Tom/Odysseus trying to return to his true love Janine/Penelope - it only took our greek friend twenty years!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 5:04 AM Title: Where There's Smoke

OK! One more thought for this chapter.

I just realized who could have given that mystery woman so much access. But, I don't want to voice that suspect's name, just yet. Just in case I'm proven wrong, again.

Author's Response:

It's okay, you can tell me, it'll be our little secret, ;)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2017 9:31 AM Title: Where There's Smoke

Well, it looks like I was wrong. But, whoever really took him...they're in for it now!

Author's Response:

Lol, perhaps, or he might be IN deep doodoo

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2017 8:04 PM Title: Where There's Smoke

Ok then. So my first prediction about Tom having a dream seems to be wrong and he in fact got taken of kidnapped by that woman last chapter.

So if this is not a dream, what is going on? Lol. This missing Tom thing came out of nowhere. Usually, I get dissapointed when a random twist shows up, but I tend to like the twist as it plays out so I think I will enjoy it soon.

What we know:
Tom is missing.
Held by some hot girl


What we don't know:
His location
Who the girl is
What she wants with Tom
What she will do with Tom
If she will care for Tom
If she will have sex with Tom
If she will feed Tom
If she will sell Tom
(Point is we don't know her purpose)

Clues:
Smoke bomb

Mission Tompossible. Lina, do you accept this mission? "Yes! Get me Serena!"

What if it's Miss Harwood's friend who took Tom? Lol, now that would be funny.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Mission Tompossible? I love it!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2017 1:21 PM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing...

I say it's Lina and Serena. They've arranged some kind of elaborate fake kidnapping. in order to keep him shrunken for themselves!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2017 6:37 PM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing...

This dream actually doesn't sound so bad. Sure, he has know idea what happened, but it does seem nice to wake up in the hands of a lovely woman who is very curious about you.

Tom doesn't like it as much because he cannot connect the dots do he is not sure whose side Evie is on. She seems friendly, but doesn't seem to give a shit about his needs.

Imagine waking up in the hands of Miss Harwood without any memory of her. At first you're scared of her, but then she seduces you and controls you to a point that you could only admire and love her. I would love to wake up to Katie like this.

Another thing is that this may not be just a dream, but also a part of the experiment. Perhaps this is a side effect and it creates a new reality in his mind.

Not sure where this is going, but I kinda like it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: licktoy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2017 11:23 AM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2

I like very much the idea Tom is helpless under the control of a dominant woman. And I do not want this story ends soon.

So I definitely prefer the first alternative.

Author's Response:

As Zoltar would say, "Your wish is granted, the story continues."  :)

Reviewer: Donnert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2017 3:20 PM Title: Tom's Story

After such a fantastic story, I do feel like it is time to retire this one and work on more masterpieces (The Ad maybe?). Perhaps combine the two endings? I would like to see Aunt Dona take out Tom in a sexy, devilish way. This way the story gets closure and we get some more awesome storyline. The shrinking reversal process could backfire and Tom could find himself very miniscule. It would be very easy to become lost in an orifice, sealed in a toy of some sort, or woven into a pair of someones panties. Whatever you decide, thank you for providing us with constant updates and excellent content. 

Author's Response:

Thaks for sharing your thoughts. for the moment it would appear some haven't quite reached their limit of tom, so it will continue for the time being.