Date: August 02 2017 12:53 PM Title: Back in Friendly Territory
This feels like a good climax, so I think the best thing to do now would be to write the denouement and epilogue. Anything else can go into a spin-off.
[Report This]Date: July 27 2017 1:39 PM Title: Back in Friendly Territory
Whoa! Not so fast! While Tom may have grown back, I'm not ready for that. I want him tiny again. Hopefully someone created another version of Tom Sr's invention.
Also, we need a Katie Harwood reunion before this is all said and done. Hopefully, Tom gets tiny in her hands.
With Mrs. Green in the picture, I would love to hear more teases from her too. She should meet Miss Harwood and talk about Tom.
How is Tom Sr doing? Did he make a tiny portable shrink ray? While the story seems to be going to end on a good note, I also want it to end it on a sexy note as well. That's what I would envision how Tom's story would end.
We still need those 1000 reviews too. Maybe a few more chapters could achieve this goal. Sex sells, more fun with Tom and more people will love it. The question is how will the fun transition to the end.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 26 2017 10:28 PM Title: Back in Friendly Territory
Whew! What a cliff-hanger!
I especially agree with that last sentence, whole-heartedly. The question is: will he get that sleep?
[Report This]Date: July 26 2017 7:08 PM Title: Back in Friendly Territory
Oh my gosh! I can't believe how relieved I am. Tom is restored and now we can see how he's grown as a person, yes I went there. But really, that's what it has always been about as I've read this. The characters have really made this piece and Tom's situation has been a fascinating catalyst for change and for revelation. I really want to see what happens now.
Awesome work Duggernaut.
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