Date: July 22 2017 8:01 AM Title: Snatched
Very good long running story. Long time reader and this is my first post. I have a plot suggestion for the story. When Mrs. Green and Tom land at the airport they are intercepted by crooked airport security and customs agents who have been tipped off, and paid off by the Russians. Knowing that she is going to be detained for several hours, have her belongings confiscated and searched, stripped nude, and even cavity searched, Mrs. Green takes a drastic measure to smuggle Tom into the country. She takes out a minitature atmospheric diving suit puts Tom into it it and swallows him. Those diving suits can withstand extreme pressure and have enough air to last almost 2 days. She smuggles him back almost like a drug mule, by swallowing him and having him pass through her body. Meanwhile we get things from Tom's perspective as he goes on his "fantastic voyage" through her digestive system unharmed. He's been on, and inserted in, women's bodies, now he gets to go through one.
It's an interesting concept, Tom has been swallowed by women twice so far in the story, not staying in the stomach for long, and even anally inserted several times. With a scenario like this he can get swallowed, spent a long inside her, go through her, and not die, while being smuggled in on his way to freedom in the one place the bad guys can't check. The suit could also be used in later chapters for protection for kinky play since he would probably be allowed to keep it since it factor into the paid for expenses of retrieving him.
Author's Response:
A very very interesting concept...
[Report This]Date: July 18 2017 1:23 AM Title: Snatched
One of the hottest teasing chapters in this story!
This woman has perfect flirtation game! It's on point and relentless. She throws all these jokes/references and teases him all at the same time. I don't know any of these references, but they seem very clever to make Tom even feel outmatched.
Is this Mrs. Smith or Mrs. Green? Felt like 1 woman with 2 names. Maybe I missed soemthing? You changed the name halfway thru.
This woman talks dirty and I love how she was first making it clear that she wasn't interested in him, and then slowly shared her thoughts to Tom about maybe reconsidering. I love it when woman think about stuff like this. Either they say it aloud like this, or it's mentioned what they are thinking.
Even though it's been about 1 chapter, this woman is arguably my 2nd favorite giantess. She is basically a female version of Tom. She seems horny and makes teasing jokes that are great for flirting. And she talks dirty!
All alone on a private jet. Mile high club anyone? This scene can easily lead to something erotic.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Sorry about the Mrs. Green/Mrs. Smith thing. I had origianlly had Hedy with a different last name, but changed it. I have since fixed it. Mrs. Green is very playful, thought you might like her!
[Report This]Date: July 17 2017 8:57 PM Title: Snatched
Miss Smith has some style. I like her even more now. She has a natural bit of curiousity and Tom didn't really give her the full Tom Treatment, but she didn't dive on him like (insert hungry cat reference here.)
Of course, story's not over yet...heh heh.
Nice stuff Duggernaut, we really get a look at Tom's level of fatigue without him really getting his victim on. He's the Rocky of living sex toys.
Thanks Duggernaut,
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[Report This]Date: July 17 2017 8:42 PM Title: Snatched
Next chapter: "The Vagina Dialogue."
Sorry! Couldn't resist. ;-D