@pixl8ed and vgiv: well said. Bravo!

The last two sentences saved this chapter.

After Tom's fantastic adventures with each women, I thought maybe we are going to get some foreign special in the mix. Unfortunately, it was the same tied up and fucked method that we have seen quite often.

The only new thing was the piss which I know that some people enjoy it so I wouldn't call it a bad thing. In fact, it's interesting. Tom never had that and with all these women, it seems like he will experience the entire spectrum.

Like I said, these last 2 sentences saved the chapter becuase that sex scene felt kinda stale to me. In addition, it felt like a minute long.

However, I love how Tom got washed up and it looks like another woman is about to use him. Is Tom being used as a sex slave by the minute? If yes, now this changes things. I have always wondered about a story where a tiny man has been used as part of a business like this. I never knew that this would be the story where I find it, but hey, it's looking good so far.

Tom is definately in for it this time. "1 by 1 the women come and go, thinking of Tom and not Michaelangelo."

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Sorry you found it a little flat, hopefully the next one restores your faith.