[Report This]Date: May 24 2017 6:32 AM Title: Fish Bowl
Hmmm...some kind of experiment?
Tom has been "used" before and come out okay. I hope he can gain info that can help him....it's good that he knows he's being watched. He can use that to feed them fake info.
How did Tom go from being such a dumass to being a compelling character?
Great stuff Duggernaut.
Author's Response:
How's this for some.cosmic irony. For Tom to grow up he needed to be shrunk? Deep.
[Report This]Date: May 24 2017 12:41 AM Title: Fish Bowl
Ok, now that's super hot! Tom got kidnapped to be this wealthy woman's sexy toy! Damn! If my life was shit, and I ended up in that position I enjoy it.
Also, this woman, just seems sexy. The way she spoke English among the other women symbolized how special she was. Then her wealthy clothes showed that this was a big shot woman. Also, this woman likes him and just states that he is handsome out loud! In addition, she just strips casually, teasing Tom, right before she says she wants him to pleasure her! This is amazing!
In the middle of the chapter, you had a bunch of letters and numbers all jumbled up which looks like something you see in a word search game.
Forget the rescue, this woman knows the real deal and I would love to see that in action!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
That bunch of letters was actually supposed to be Russian. I'm glad you approve of the direction this little tale is taking. Next chapter more about the mysterious Miss Smith then onto some fun stuff
[Report This]Date: May 23 2017 7:16 PM Title: Fish Bowl
Little Miss Hornacova certainly seems to be taking her time. So, I guess not all Slavic women like to go "Russian" into sex.
Author's Response:
Funny I got the while.mother Russia thing stuck in my head otherwise I'd try for some witty comeback or other. Nope nothing rhymes with Turkmenistan