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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2017 6:01 AM Title: Bloodhound

Sounds like Serena would just love to have a tiny man to dominate.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 9:53 PM Title: Bloodhound

Well now,this is a turn. 

Serena might be a mover and shaker,but this miss Smth seems like the type to get things done.  She might be walking out of where ever Tom is with him in her kevlar panties (it's the only way she could do it, of course) in a couple of chapters. Or at least have everyone who cares about him pointed in the right direction. 

It is rather impressive, the support network Tom has garnered.  We might see how much pressure they can bring to bear.  Only this time, it's not on Tom's tiny body.

Thanks again Dugger Fiend Naut.  Great work.

pix

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 7:58 PM Title: Bloodhound

Hedy Smith. More like Helly Sith. I bet this woman is responsible for Tom's kidnapping and she wants to get rid of all the people that know Tom. She might send an electronic memory eraser via a text message and once it's opened, the subject forgets about Tom.

Serena was in control of Lina so I wasn't worried about her. But this woman is a wild card and I don't trust her. Even if Lina told Serena to do anything necesssry, I doubt this was acceptable. Serena can't just tell random people about Tom.

How does Janine know all the people Tom has been with. She doesn't know about Sam, right? Also, what about the entire girl population who was told of Tom when they had voodoo dolls in their panties? I doubt Janine knows all their numbers.

Anything think it's been a while since Tom got to have some fun lately? Being passed from woman to woman, you would think he gets some action here and there.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 5:58 PM Title: Bloodhound

Hedy Smith; Hedy Smith. Why does that name sound so familiar? Is she that super-witch from "The Contract" trilogy?*


*Which I believe is STILL a work in progress (hint! hint!).

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