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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 6:16 AM Title: New Digs

Since we are freely discussing multiple works in the same review:  This has been a great phase for tiny heroes.  First Oliver show's the 'Megs up and now Tom has an escape plan in like 10 seconds.  He's really getting good at this.

I also have to note, based on Tom's observations of her, Natalya seems to be an object of Tom's compassion.  While I have to note that it's interesting that he can feel sympathy for someone with so much potential power over him, because he's so aclimated to being his size, it also speaks volumes about him as a human being.  Maybe he is becoming a better, more compassionate  person.

Loving the mysterious phase of the story.  Thanks Duggernaut.

Peace

 

Pix



Author's Response:

More intrigue coming up...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 6:06 AM Title: New Digs

Author's Response:

Should I or shouldn't I? Is Tatiana actually a cold hearted calculating b*tch destined for inclusion in the Omega Pi sorority? :0


Reader’s Response:

You fiend!



Author's Response:

I say Fiend? Why sir, that doth happen to be my middle name   :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2017 5:59 PM Title: New Digs

English translation: you're going to sadistically keep me in suspense for the next week or so. Aren't you?

Author's Response:

Umm...yep

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 6:54 PM Title: New Digs

The question, though, is: "Who's the guest?" I mean, I think we've already established that Tatiana isn't a knowing accomplice to this latest abduction. And, while a lot of people make jokes about the legal profession (like "criminal lawyer being two different names for the same thing"), I don't see Serena being the double-dealing traitor, here. That is; the one who gave the abductor all the necessary entry codes for the Lindholm Institute (or whatever it's called). Serena strikes me as being 100% loyal to her biggest client. A truly ethical person!

So that leaves two suspects, as far as I can see. Miss Gaynor (the campus librarian from back home)...or Jessica Lindholm, after all.

Author's Response:

Sooo many ways to go, while the notion of the librarian financing the abduction did make me smile, I'll say that's not the case  :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 4:59 PM Title: New Digs

So, Tom went from hostage to guest. In a guest bedroom. He has food, water, and decent looking women after him. For most people, this wouldn't be so bad, but for Tom, the women in his life are like 11/10 so I'm sure he misses that.

Wait a minute. Is this the Omega Pi house? 3 different girls, represting the wristbands? Tom trying to find clues just like Oliver? Oddly similar.

Pace seems to be moving a bit slows lately and we meet one woman per chapter. I wonder when the family even finds a trace of where Tom went.

I also have this hunch that a big reveal is about to happen soon. Like Tom discovers something that he shouldn't be seeing. Just a thought.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Wouldn't that be funny, Tom winds up at the Omega house? What a crossover that would be!

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