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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2017 8:49 PM Title: Destination Unknown

P.S.---Okay! So I was wrong about it being Jessica Lindholm. But, now, I'm hoping that I'm equally wrong about Tatiana being a knowing accessory to this crime. Because, I agree with Tom's assessment. The girl proved refreshingly sweet when she had custody of him! As opposed to the domineering narcissist that Janine initially demonstrated herself to be.*

*Emphasis on "initially!"

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2017 9:15 AM Title: Destination Unknown

Oh, man!  I love Tatiana. 

I'm guessing the innocence I love might be the problem.  At least I hope.

Good villians showing up...bond girl flavored...my favorite.

Loving this Duggernaut...just loving it.

Peace

 

Pix



Author's Response:

Should I or shouldn't I? Is Tatiana actually a cold hearted calculating b*tch destined for inclusion in the Omega Pi sorority? :0

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2017 1:35 AM Title: Destination Unknown

Actually, they are in a submarine. This woman has a Russian name but that doesn't make her related to Tatiana. Also, this woman actually loves him dearly, but doesn't want Tom to know that.

Janine actually knows where Tom is becuase she put some tracking ship on him while Tom was passed out one night. The reason why they don't give Tom food is so that he will hate them. Tom has been hit with a dart while he was asleep so he didn't remember anything. Smoke bomb was so the regular sized people could see them escape.

It is not a ransom becuase then these women would be forced to treat him well and not damage him. They do intend on keeping him, but we do not know for how long.

However, these women have a stronge fragrance that only tinies can smell very well. So the grandpa Tom will recognize the scent while the other women can't smell it.

Tom Sr has been in many wars, dealing with Russian spies and has traveled accrosss the world and can speak 7 languages. He has been in this same situation before on his adventures before he got rich and then shrunk.

Also, while Tom Sr lost energy during the experiment and is now weak, the boy Tom absorbed the energy and is now slightly radioactive.

If under stress Tom can blow up and destroy everything around him for a 3 mile radius but he will be unharmed. Only Janine can blow Tom up and she can activate Tom whenever she wants.

In addition, Janine also has a retrieve button which teleports Tom inside her vagina. She seduced a scientist to put a tiny teleported in there and can put Tom where he belongs.

Lina is aware of Janine's tracker in Tom, but Lina wants to retrieve Tom herself and gain the respect of Tom's mom again. Also, for the sake of the plot, we will see Serena again for this purpose.

Tom will be safe forever, he is just on another adventure and this drama that Lina and everyone is causing is to scare Tom's mom. It's a fake heist meant to glorify Lina when she gets Tom back.

I looked up Duggernaut's brainstorming notebook and found all this stuff. I thought it was fake, but after reading these last few chapters about these women kidnapping Tom, I think I believe it.

Of course some details found in this chapter don't match up, but I guess Duggernaut changed them. It's impressive how Duggernaut can create and plan such a brilliant plot twist and then alter it in ways that it can still make sense! Amazing!

(I made this review up, or did I?)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Lol, Tom I swear sometimes you make me laugh. this was great! Now begins the odyssey of Tom/Odysseus trying to return to his true love Janine/Penelope - it only took our greek friend twenty years!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2017 9:17 PM Title: Destination Unknown

A-ha! So you did go with the Russian Mob angle, after all. To say this is going to complicate things is putting it mildly.

Author's Response:

Couldn't help myself, once people indicated they wanted more Tom, it was a natural fit.

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