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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 5:04 AM Title: Where There's Smoke

OK! One more thought for this chapter.

I just realized who could have given that mystery woman so much access. But, I don't want to voice that suspect's name, just yet. Just in case I'm proven wrong, again.

Author's Response:

It's okay, you can tell me, it'll be our little secret, ;)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2017 7:30 PM Title: Where There's Smoke

P.S.---almost 1.1 million readers????!

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Author's Response:

WHAT?!? Holy smokes

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2017 9:31 AM Title: Where There's Smoke

Well, it looks like I was wrong. But, whoever really took him...they're in for it now!

Author's Response:

Lol, perhaps, or he might be IN deep doodoo

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2017 8:54 PM Title: Where There's Smoke

What is the nationality of the device?  And the chemical agent?  Custom?  What other incidents has it turned up in?

So the perpetrator left it behind....and didn't take the time to kick it under the bed.  That means they were in a great hurry.   Didn't have night vision and didn't want to risk getting the distinct scent on them.  Sounds like security is mostly in tact, one or two well placed traitors at best.  Since they had to pull it off with limited equipment.  It might also mean they are close, or had an unrelaible means of egress,  since they are taking steps to avoiding being trackable by dogs.

Better hope Serena is as good at this as me.

hehe.

 

Pix



Author's Response:

I modeled the device after once by the russians when they attempted to retake the theater. You do seem very adept at sleuthing which means I'll have to elevate my game. And here we go...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2017 8:04 PM Title: Where There's Smoke

Ok then. So my first prediction about Tom having a dream seems to be wrong and he in fact got taken of kidnapped by that woman last chapter.

So if this is not a dream, what is going on? Lol. This missing Tom thing came out of nowhere. Usually, I get dissapointed when a random twist shows up, but I tend to like the twist as it plays out so I think I will enjoy it soon.

What we know:
Tom is missing.
Held by some hot girl


What we don't know:
His location
Who the girl is
What she wants with Tom
What she will do with Tom
If she will care for Tom
If she will have sex with Tom
If she will feed Tom
If she will sell Tom
(Point is we don't know her purpose)

Clues:
Smoke bomb

Mission Tompossible. Lina, do you accept this mission? "Yes! Get me Serena!"

What if it's Miss Harwood's friend who took Tom? Lol, now that would be funny.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Mission Tompossible? I love it!

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