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Reviewer: Gogblo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 9:37 PM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing...

The chapters are way too short, maybe try to put 3-4 together into one.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2017 1:21 PM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing...

I say it's Lina and Serena. They've arranged some kind of elaborate fake kidnapping. in order to keep him shrunken for themselves!

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2017 8:16 PM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing...

And again Tom demonstrates his resilience.... fortunately he's being held by a woman...let's see if his charm stil works under these circumstances, whatever the they are.

Great stuff Duggernaut. Mysterious giantess and mysterious situation.  Gotta love it.

Peace,

 

pixl8ed

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2017 6:37 PM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing...

This dream actually doesn't sound so bad. Sure, he has know idea what happened, but it does seem nice to wake up in the hands of a lovely woman who is very curious about you.

Tom doesn't like it as much because he cannot connect the dots do he is not sure whose side Evie is on. She seems friendly, but doesn't seem to give a shit about his needs.

Imagine waking up in the hands of Miss Harwood without any memory of her. At first you're scared of her, but then she seduces you and controls you to a point that you could only admire and love her. I would love to wake up to Katie like this.

Another thing is that this may not be just a dream, but also a part of the experiment. Perhaps this is a side effect and it creates a new reality in his mind.

Not sure where this is going, but I kinda like it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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