[Report This]Date: April 22 2017 11:23 AM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
I like very much the idea Tom is helpless under the control of a dominant woman. And I do not want this story ends soon.
So I definitely prefer the first alternative.
Author's Response:
As Zoltar would say, "Your wish is granted, the story continues." :)
Date: April 21 2017 2:18 PM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
The second one would tie the story up nicely, and the first one is an interesting cliff-hanger. However, I absolutely choose the first one, because I want this to continue, even after all that's happened.
Also, Tess fiddling with the machine needs to be developed and resolved. Unless that becomes a spin-off...
@TomSpeedy: Any other story ideas?
Author's Response:
Thanks Ancient Relic for offering some clarity to my too cryptic proposition. As you can see, the story will continue. Cheers
Date: April 20 2017 9:07 AM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
From what I gather it seems like the chapter title test to you plan on killing him off I'm not sure on how I feel about that granted this store is gone on for a long time and it might be time to end it considering all your other projects however I feel like the other might be a better direction to go if it's what I think it is that you're going to subjugate time to some women who are way more in control of themselves and not very support other than his Wiley and devilish antics it might be a good lesson for him. I don't know. you got me confuse bro which one's supposed to be with?
Author's Response:
My sincere apologies for the confusing way I put this out there. I think you might enjoy the new direction. thanks for making an effort to share your feelings!
[Report This]Date: April 19 2017 10:00 PM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
What was the middle part?
I have to disagree with Tom Speedy, it is very necessary to reach 1000 reviews. Very!
I would love to see the story continue, especially in light of the hints about new directions. When in doubt, the answer is always "more Tom's story." And more cowbell.
If you're done, you're done. Really, you should feel free to go as you like. My vote is continue, but really, my vote is "be happy Duggernaut." You've done plenty for us fans and I can't ask you to do more than makes you happy.
My real vote is a vote of thanks.
Peace
PixL8Ed
Author's Response:
Much appreciated. I am torn with tom, as with other characters from other stories, I find myself invested in the character and while I could tie this up, part of me what to keep going. "Easy, guys.. I put my pants on just like the rest of you -- one leg at a time. Except, once my pants are on, I make gold records."
[Report This]Date: April 19 2017 8:42 PM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
When Tom's mom was about to leave, Tom said for her to "cose" the door. (For both parts)
Also, after the texting with Janine, you wrote "Curling, he decided her would" when it should be he decided he.
As for which part to choose, I'm not sure. I want the story to continue but I can't tell which part is the one where the story continues.
The first part is confusing becuase Tom was watching videos and he is randomly confined inside something which made no sense to me.
The second part, I can't tell if Tom is dying or being transformed. If his heart stopped, I guess that's bad, and I want him to live.
I want the story to continue. I want Tom to maybe have a round with Dona, or at least more flirty things from her. I would love it if she told Tom what she did with grandpa over 2 years to tease him. Also, I absolutely want to see Miss Harwood get a chance to keep Tom for a bit.
Lastly, this is not necessary, but it would be kinda cool to reach 1000 reviews. Then after that we can find conclusion.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for catching all of my mistakes tom, I copy and pasted the first part of the chapters that's why the error appeared in both places. !000 reviews? Who'd've thunk it?
[Report This]Date: April 19 2017 8:01 PM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
Personally, I'm fine with you continuing. The story is well enough written that it's easy to stay with it. Besides, what man wouldn't want to be the object of affection of many different women, especially while he's still young?
Author's Response:
Thank you for your input. I honestly cant think of a one, but sometimes being wanted and being had are two entirely different things. thanks for sharing your input.
[Report This]Date: April 19 2017 7:09 PM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
Part 1: I'm voting on the culprit being the research assistant.
Part 2: I'm voting that either Dr. Holmstrom or Aunt Dona revives him with some GTS mouth-to-mouth.
Author's Response:
Hmm, maybe nostril to head, nah, too gross. Guess i'll just have to keep this one rolling along then.
Date: April 19 2017 5:51 PM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
I prefer Test 2. As much as I've liked this story, I think it's time for it to end. I always root for the tinies, and I would really like a resolution where Tom is restored permanently and can live his life, hopefully with Janine.
Author's Response:
the general consensus seems to be leaning to continuing, so for the moment, Tom's journey will continue. the trick will be to make it reasonably feasible. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!