[Report This]Date: April 13 2017 4:08 PM Title: Family Affair
I like where this is headed. Dona has a wicked personality! As always, thank you for the update and I look forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to share some positive feedback! It is always much appreciated. :)
[Report This]Date: April 12 2017 9:56 PM Title: Family Affair
Holy hell!
Even the aunt can't resist....what ever Tom's got, they should bottle. I'm not saying put him in a bottle...he's been through enough.
How can a scene be that sexy....and that wrong...with no sex? Must be the master at work.
Great work again Duggernaut. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Lol Tom is an agent of chaos and the author of his own misadventures. Next chapter Tom will ruminate on what just happened between him and his aunt. Thanks for the props!
[Report This]Date: April 12 2017 9:30 PM Title: Family Affair
3rd line you said "Toom Sr."
Also, this chapter title was used when Tom was teasing Lina for the first time. Running out of clever titles are we? :)
When Dona started talking about her fun with Tom Sr, I began laughing. Also, I love it when a giantess teases Tom like that. Making him connect the dots is fun to read.
Yes! I love this Dona! Usually I despise an aunt relationship, but ever since Dona kept Tom Sr for 2 years, I made her an exception. I mean, she took on this role for 2 years! I would love to be with her then!
Ok...the "but" and "come" joke just made me smile. Dona outplayed Tom like a pro. You bet she had so much fun with Tom Sr making jokes and making love.
Wow! After all this teasing you put this cliffhanger and end the chapter....just as the good stuff was coming.
Next time Dona should put Tom in her panties and return back to her sister and tell her that Tom is in his room, but actually he is serving her.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom after 150+ chapters I hadn't realized the chapter title duplication so I changed it! Also I fixed the Toom. I think it's easy to forget Tom is still a teen with not a whole.lot of real world experience so his exchange with the aunt shifted from him to her very quickly. She has had TWO years to experiment with all the way a woman might have fun with a tiny. Forgive the Carycomic like pun - in over his head is where Tom would find himself.
[Report This]Date: April 12 2017 5:59 PM Title: Family Affair
Yeah! Don't test her, Tom. This story has been proceeding very nicely without any graphic examples of the I-word. There's absolutely no legitimate need to introduce it at this late date.
If you need catharsis that badly, I'd rather you have a wet dream about the campus librarian, back home! P.S.---I know that, as a fictional character, you can't hear me.*
*But, it saves me from getting verbally sand-blasted for yelling at the author. ;-D
Author's Response:
I know your stance on the 'I' category and it's been teased before...teased. this story is about to take a hard left, but not that way :)