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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2017 7:21 PM Title: Maternal Instincts

Hmmm.

I really don't think the sould go.  Not because I want Tom stuck in his situation.  They should wait at least the time it took for the last solution to "relapse."  Just seems like a good caution.  

Poor Tom has been through enough and deserves his stature back, but it would be really hard on him to endure another failure.   And kind of tragic if he was bigger for a while and his Janine wasn't there.

Peace

PixL8Ed



Author's Response:

Waitng seems like a good idea to see if there are any lingering effects... then again a lot of things can happen when you are a stranger in a strange land.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2017 8:18 PM Title: Maternal Instincts

First of all, glad you are back. I'm guessing you had some sort of spring break or something.

Second, I'm glad you deleted that horrendous spam review. It shows me that you care about your reviews once again which is awesome.

Wow! Even Lina has changed as a character and I love it. The way she was thinking about Tom and realizing what experiences she had with him, she realized that Tom will have many opportunities with her and Lina doesn't have to go after Tom all the time. She can show that she can control that urge better than the other ladies and I like that. Her gentler style has also affected the way she talks to Tom and that's awesome.

Janine and Tom are bound to be a couple. Like Ken and Barbie. You just want to ship them together.

Tom has made another great point. If everything goes as planned and Tom is big again, how does his relationship with Lina change. I mean, if Janine marries Tom and Tom decides to have fun with Lina one day, usually that would be messed up. However, I just have this feeling that Janine would laugh it off if she caught Tom with her mom. They all been through so much that this craze for Tom just makes it so special.

Now I'm trying to imagine Tom with everyone when he becomes normal. One day he shops with Lina, they do it in the changing room. Gets injured, does it with Cassidy on his bed. Gets in detention and has fun with Miss Harwood. What a dream come true.

So is gramps normal sized or is he tiny? His condition seems to be fine but his size wasn't mentioned. Also, it sounds like Dona is going to have fun with Tom Sr once he is better.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Busy training and am just about done. Yeah, don't know where that weird review came from - good riddance. Although it has been a year and a half for us, it's only been a couple of months story time, so while i wanted to show dynamic character evolution, I didn't want it to be too unbelievable. Right now Tom's grandfaterh is full sized but out for the moment. toying with a couple of plot devices right now...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2017 7:00 PM Title: Maternal Instincts

And the poignancy continues. Bravo!

Author's Response:

Graze, ah graze!

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