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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2017 9:38 AM Title: Aftermath

Chapter 157. Aftermath.

Okay, kinda with Tom here.  I'm not saying it's a good idea to hop under that gadget right now, but the two women are being kind of bitches about it.  Basically saying, "We won't give you a choice about what you are willing to risk to get your life back, but we will give you choice as to how you react to our not giving you a choice."

"Lina, Mom, go fuck yourselves."

Fortunately, Tom is a little fucktard when pussy shows up.  Odds are a little go round with Lina and all his worries will evaporate. But maybe not, this has been a rough journey for Tom, he's clearly ready to see its end.

The problem is, they're out of guinea pigs.

Now, this is not the SW fan in me talking, not just anyway.  But if the women who've gotten so much fun at Tom's expence got their resources together and got gradpa's gadget up and running.  And one of them was willing to take the huge risk of being shrunk.  Who?  Well, it might make a good payoff for the "Janine moment."  After all, she would generate the most urgency toward getting results. 

Now I don't think for one fucking second that Tom would let her go first, but think of the suspence.

Just a thought...

Boy this has been a great read.  I really am root for Tom now and I still think Tess deserves her own happy ending.  Just great reading great work like this is its own reward.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 10:09 PM Title: Aftermath

Ha! I was expecting Ella to tell Lina to seduce Tom so he won't think of trying the procedure.

"Lina, could you please distract Tom for me?"

Lina takes Tom to other room and has fun. Well, it looks like Lina will have fun with Tom after all.

Life support? Are you serious? Put gramps in another test so he can take another chance. He is missing out on Dona. You know Dona is going to miss the fun they have. 2 years of fun, and how it's jeapordized. But if Tom Sr doesn't make it, what a way to go! Having sex constantly with Dona for 2 years. Might as well go to heaven.

If I was Tom, I would not try the test. Why lose the fun he has being shrunk. Tom makes it seem like it's a bad thing, but we all know he kind of enjoys it. I would love to be him. Stay shrunken forever, especially being surrounded by beautiful ladies!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 8:02 PM Title: Aftermath

Masterfully poignant.

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