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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2017 9:49 PM Title: The Gustafson Institute

This seems like the typical chapter in this story. We got the parents doing their own thing. Tom flirting again, Tom gets left alone with a girl, and he uses his strategy to seduce another woman.

Also, I'm not ready to be attracted to this girl just becuase of one sentence describing her beauty. Usually it's the dialogue that makes me like the giantess. Miss Harwood had the best comments that hinted at things. This girl just happened to be on Tom's radar and he is seducing her.

Hmm. I think I like it when the giantess seduces Tom rather than Tom seduces her. Or, maybe it's that this girl is new and I see her as a complete stranger.

Reminds me of Kandi from Omega Pi. I like that depth in a character before the action.

Other than that, this chapter is great. I wish the plane ride was longer. Dona seems kinky. Being alone with a doctor's assistant is hot.

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I think your preference for a giantess is a self assured woman who knows what she likes and by that, I mean a little fella, then she simply takes what she wants, there may some witty dialogue, or not, she's in charge. She doesn't need to be seduced or convinced about the game, she's already two or three moves ahead, a la Miss Harwoord. Close? :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2017 7:57 PM Title: The Gustafson Institute

Careful, Tom. You could be creating a Freya-stein!*


*Oh, come on! Stop groaning! You know I had to say that.

Author's Response:

I thought you might go something like, 'out of the freya-ing pan and into the fire,' tee hee

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