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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2017 8:40 AM Title: Habeas Corpus

Chpt 152 Habeas Corpus

Uhhh....a social justice warrior and a lawyer...if you had any sense that rat would be looking pretty good right now.

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2017 3:16 PM Title: Habeas Corpus

I absolutelly loved her teasing dominace :-)



Author's Response:

Not quite what Tom had in mind...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 5:57 PM Title: Habeas Corpus

She has just given new meaning to the phrase "p***y-whupped."

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 1:40 PM Title: Habeas Corpus

At the end of the last chapter, Serena seemed like she was in Cassidy's position. Then she turned it around and left Tom defeated while remaining in complete control. Nice.



Author's Response:

Thought a little twist might be a nice change 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 1:17 PM Title: Habeas Corpus

Not what I expected, but wow that was sexy. I was amazed at what she did and I like it.

I think it was becuase what she did was new to me. She opens her legs to show that she was the one in control not letting Tom seduce her. Then she sat on his body, everything below his neck and that scene alone got me. From Tom's angle, Serena must have looked like a complete goddess. Then Serena walked away, leaving me wanting more.

Happy Valentine's Day to all of Tom's female friends!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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