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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2017 8:32 AM Title: Lina's Last Dance

OK! Being serious, now. Even though being serious makes me feel like I'm ruining someone else's good joke by over-analyzing it.

I like how you've put the proverbial shoe on the other foot with the Lindholm ladies. The first time around, Little Tom was at their arguable mercy. Although, in Lina's case, his first time with her was comparatively gentler and more voluntary. Yet, this time around, he was the one mostly in control of them! Using what he'd learned from his previous experiences to get the proverbial upper hand.

I shudder to think of what he could do to that poor librarian if she ever got _her_ inexperienced hands on him!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2017 11:19 PM Title: Lina's Last Dance

Please tell me that the afternoon is not over. That scene felt somewhat quick compared to the other women. I think Lina deserves a round 2 for how much time she waited.

Tom probably went right to the chase becuase he was tired from last night. After a rough night with Janine, Lina will present that lovely recovery to aid Tom as he relaxes.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2017 9:02 PM Title: Lina's Last Dance

Screw the Wheat Thins. I must have ice water...now!!!!!!!

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