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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2017 8:16 PM Title: The House Janine Built

Or, failing that, Marta can be revealed as secretly being on the payroll of Jessica Lindholm. ;-)

Author's Response:

Lol, maybe

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2016 6:23 PM Title: The House Janine Built

Dear Santa,

I confess. I have been a naughty boy. I have requested a story based on my fantasies and what I liked. Hopefully, you will forgive me and see how my naughty ideas were used for good instead of evil.

Please let this Marta situation be just a decoy. Maybe let her play a role as leverage for someone else. I hope Miss Harwood bribed Marta to sneak off with Tom and then Marta gives Tom to Katie. Plot twist!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2016 6:00 PM Title: The House Janine Built

"Dear Santa: I have been enjoying Duggernaut's story a whoooooooooole bunch. But, for Xmas, this year, I would really, really, REALLY like Marta the Maid to get her shot at Little Tom in chapter 145. I've been super-extra good this year. So, I'm hoping that will persuade you to say 'yes!' "

"Yours truly: Carycomic."

P.S.--Merry Christmas, Dug. :-)

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