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Reviewer: Rapha the ghost Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2016 9:41 AM Title: Katie

Dang it dude, you've got me on edge. xD

Keep up the awesome work! (^~^)=b

Author's Response:

Excellent! Thanks for the props

Reviewer: ILike Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2016 7:38 PM Title: Katie

one of the longest stories I read on here for sure lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to play along, I'm still not quite sure how this thing will turn out

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2016 6:46 PM Title: Katie

I don't profess to  be a polished writer


You're becoming one, though.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the vote of confidence :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2016 4:42 PM Title: Katie

You have always been so great at including lots of detail, but the chapter titled "Katie" barely had the detail I expected. I thought this was the "hour of fun" chapter.

Good news is that Katie still has some kinky ideas for Tom.

Best line of the chapter:

"I would tie you from your feet to your head and smother you against my pussy for an entire evening of hot yoga for your little prank,” she threatened."

Sometimes, I just wish Miss Harwood had some sort of journal where she describes all the things she has planned for Tom.

Good news is that Tom is staying in the house for a while, and guess who else is also staying? Lina! I bet she has something extra special for Tom.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I figured the title would light you up, I knew you would approve of Miss Harwood's detention time for Tom. :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2016 2:25 PM Title: Katie

@Carycomic: That would be a tragic ending. No more sex.



Author's Response:

I thought that was only if you got married

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2016 2:12 PM Title: Katie

Aw, shucks! I guess that means ch. 143 is the concluding chapter. :-(

Author's Response:

It's ending? Nobody told me...

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