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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2016 9:43 AM Title: Tracking Tom

Calahonda: Fun fact: Duggernaut has really written something special here, but it was originally TomSpeedy's idea. I don't think a reader's idea and an author's capabilities have ever fit together as perfectly as they did here.

Carycomic: I have a thing for giantess lawyers, so I'd be quite happy to see Serena have a go.

Duggernaut: I think one of the best things about Tom's Story is Tom himself. He's basically a tiny sex god, supremely skilled, supremely confident, adventurous, constantly having sex with all sorts of women. The stuff that makes women want to have sex with him, and men want to be him.



Author's Response:

Thanks for providing some background context. I find it intriguing this story has been the one to get lit. I tend to favor capable protagonists who get in over their heads but you're right there is just something about Tom. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2016 9:52 PM Title: Tracking Tom

Seriously, though: I loved the detective work done by all the parties involved! It prolonged the suspense quite suitably. At the same time, it raises questions like: "Will Serena the Lawyer get her turn, now?"

Author's Response:

An interesting idea. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2016 9:47 PM Title: Tracking Tom

"May I come?"

Misprint...or Freudian slip reference to the next chapter? LOL!

Author's Response:

Freud has nothing to do with it. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2016 6:44 PM Title: Tracking Tom

The last phrase! Omg! I know....exactly.... where he belongs!

Return to Tess. Hmm. Maybe after 5 rounds of fun! Or after 5 days of fun!

I can't believe you led Miss Harwood to Tom all in 1 chapter! That means that playtime is next!

I'm feel so excited! I can only wonder what she will do to him. I hope she keeps him for not just the rest of school, but even take him home with her to spend the night together! And the best part is that no one really knows!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I thought you might like this latest little turn ; )

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2016 6:20 PM Title: Tracking Tom

The temptation is going to run high in the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Absolutely right.  will desire override reason?

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