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Reviewer: cronolp Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2016 7:38 AM Title: Tuesday Night

Is Tom going to be a shrunken man again?



Author's Response:

The next chapter should answer that question nicely... :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2016 8:26 PM Title: Tuesday Night

@TomSpeedy: check your e-mail under "Contact."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2016 2:09 PM Title: Tuesday Night

Oh-ho-HO! I think I see where this sudden plot development is going.

You brain-twisting sneak, you! ;-D

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2016 1:12 PM Title: Tuesday Night

An accident about grandpa? Where are you taking us Duggernaut? You could have just made a simple "someone stole the shrinking machine" scene and that might make more sense.

Right now. I'm in the dark. Obviously I see a connection between Tom and his grandpa and how the shrinking has caused some effects post enlargement. I just wonder if Tom will be tiny again and maybe this is the way it's going to be.

I don't think Grampa Tom is dying, or close to dying. His unconscious state will eventually pan out and resolve itself on its own. Perhaps, he will even shrink. (Crosses fingers.)

I have another idea. Since Tom feels worse and worse as the day goes on, maybe by the time he reaches Miss Harwood's class, he shrinks! By the way, she was available for tutoring Wednesday.

Interesting turn of events. I can't wait for the next chapter!

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