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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2017 6:41 AM Title: Just an ordinary everyday Tuesday

Oh god!  Grandpa shrunk...I know it.

Tom! Janine! ( I can't belive I'm saying this)  Go quick!  Do the deed!  C'mon, no regrets!.

Totally hooked...I'm totally hooked.  Again...

 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2016 7:12 AM Title: Just an ordinary everyday Tuesday

If I had to guess, I'd say that Lina discreetly sent the shrinking machine to her scientist friend to have it fixed.



Author's Response:

I can say such is not the case, however, there is nothing saying the technology might not have been independently replicated by Lina's friend....

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2016 8:44 PM Title: Just an ordinary everyday Tuesday

Btw: Happy 750th review! :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2016 7:11 PM Title: Just an ordinary everyday Tuesday

Oh, crap! I bet Grandpa Tom had a sub-atomic relapse.

Author's Response:

Soon...all will be revealed

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2016 5:05 PM Title: Just an ordinary everyday Tuesday

One small typo. You wrote "spend an entire say in her panties" when it should be "day".

But otherwise. What a chapter!

Best part was the wordplay with Miss Harwood. I mean. My goodness! I did not expect that. I would've exploded right there. She even squeezed his shoulder to show that she has control over him.

Also, yes! Tutoring! 1 on 1! I always been asking this and I can't wait for it! Maybe Miss Harwood will shrink him to help him out with other things.


As for what happened at the end. Let me guess. Grandpa's shrink machine is gone. :) That's what Tess is trying to say. And let me guess who took it. That's right. The sexy Miss Harwood. Her cunning plan was to confuse Tom with her sexy yoga class but it was actually a lie and she couldn't tutor him becuase today, she was stealing the machine, ready to shrink Tom tomorrow. I'm calling it.

Miss Harwood will strike back and this time, keep him, in her groove. :)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the typo Tom. I thought you might like this contribution. :)

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