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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2017 6:33 AM Title: The New Pet Rock

Chpt 132. The New Pet Rock

I kinda gotta wonder, how many of those girls are imagining a tiny girl in there?

Give your little doll tits and long hair and you're good to go.

I bet Miss Addison did, only her's have wings.

Just sayin'.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2016 4:10 PM Title: The New Pet Rock

I can see it, now. Tom has that sub-atomic relapse his grandfather (sort of) hinted at. He's found by Tatiana, who consequently smuggles him off-campus as one of those fetish dolls. Upon getting far enough away, she exchanges him for an envelope crammed with hundred-dollar bills handed over by either Serena (acting on Mrs. Lindholms' behalf) or Janine's sister, Jessie (who then smuggles him back to her college sorority).*

*Tell TomSpeedy I'm trying to make it 20x. ;-)

Author's Response:

At least twenty. Three chapters from now, we are all going to have a oooh moment :)

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2016 6:56 AM Title: The New Pet Rock

Just finished with Ch. 132; this story only gets more & more fascinating! I am happy to notice that your grammar and spelling have greatly improved since I started to read your writings. Congratulations and keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I hope fascinating equals interesting :) I have made an effort to be more conscientious about the English, thank you for noticing. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2016 5:57 AM Title: The New Pet Rock

Ooooh! Fore-shadowy!

Author's Response:

Dun dun dun

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2016 8:32 PM Title: The New Pet Rock

Voodoo dolls? lol, really? Next person to invent the vibrating doll will be rich. Why use a voodoo one, when you can get a soft, rubber, firm, vibrating doll to put in your panties. Pleasure 24/7!

I wonder what the dolls look like? Do they look like Tom? That would be funny.

I wonder what is the purpose of introducing this little segment, Duggeranut.

Either way, I hope Tom gets back to his class with Miss Harwood. (Could we get a story just on Miss Harwood? Or a sexy teacher like her? You could finish your other storie first.)


I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

They're little clothes dolls, you see them just about everywhere (google little voodoo dolls). I do like the idea of a malleable little silicon figurine...I just may have to use that in another story :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2016 5:05 PM Title: The New Pet Rock

I bet this chapter is setting something up...



Author's Response:

Nah...

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