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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2017 5:29 AM Title: Not Feeling Lunch

chpt 129 Not Feeling Lunch

Okay...you know that scene in the horror movie?  The psycho/monster is lying there on the floor, surely he's dead.  But the film keeps going?

I'm feeling kinda there right now.

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2016 11:51 PM Title: Not Feeling Lunch

I am "afraid" Tom feels bad because something went wrong in his resizing and his molecules may collapse again - this time forever ;-)



Author's Response:

Hmm that just might be an issue...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2016 9:33 AM Title: Not Feeling Lunch

Daunting? I'd say it's a "little" overwhelming!

Ba-DUM-Boom!!

Seriously, though: it's nice to see that you're devoting more than one or two chapters to his respite at normal size. It shows you're not selling out to the "Just-give-us-some-wham-bam-thank-you-giant-ma'am" crowd.

Author's Response:

I'm not quite done with our intrepid hero yet...he's still a little shaken up

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2016 5:45 PM Title: Not Feeling Lunch

I know what's wrong. He is addicted to pussy and he ain't getting it. He has an addiction problem and he is suffering without it.

All the girls know how to cheer him. Tom just doesn't know that sex is what makes him feel better.

Interesting how open Janine is. I remember in the beginning of the story, Janine despised Tom despite his grin that he threw at her. Now she wants him. Awesome turn of events, having the prettiest girl in school go after you.

I think Tom needs to rest in bed and let some girl do all the action next time. Then, Tom can take control next time. Maybe, we can see some hot after school action, like those stories you hear all the time like some guy is doing it with a teacher in the closet or something.

Man, I want Granmps to stay. He seems so joyful and his enthusiasm toward shrinking is incredible. It's like when you have a fantasy and you find someone with the same fantasy and you share ideas.

Hopefully Tom gets better soon. I believe there is still lots of fun left for him.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Aren't we all? Yes Janine has transformed herself into an emoting human being after starting out as quite a self absorbed she devil. This story isn't quite done yet

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