Date: September 25 2016 1:38 PM Title: Zapped
Well, I just hope that Tom shrink again..... and maybe Lina run away with him..... "the last one is only a dream of my...XD"
[Report This]Date: September 23 2016 3:28 PM Title: Zapped
Great chapter.
I look forward to seeing Tom trying to return to a normal life, especially running into Miss Hardwood and Miss Addison. Especially Miss Addison since she helped cover for Tom even after Janine took Tom away from her.
I also kinda hope Addison and Hardwood bond over their shared experience with Tom. Maybe Hardwood can help her loosen up.
Author's Response:
Those are a couple of the loose ends I referenced in another response to a review.
[Report This]Date: September 23 2016 11:35 AM Title: Zapped
Whoa! What a minute!
They already enlarged him? This chapter? Duggernaut, I'm used to you using every detail to sneak in a chapter. Such as the "the car ride" or "the facility" or "Dr. Harrison" and then "the machine" and finally would be this chapter. Instead, you cut straight to the enlargement which is something that I did not expect from you.
Well, now that he is big, do the ladies still want a piece of him? I can tell Tom wants a piece of them. It must feel great to be normal again. It's like waking up from a dream of giantesses and all of a sudden, they return in your normal life.
Like, what if you dream of some imaginary hot girl, and then you wake up and she is in your life. I bet that's how Tom feels with some of these women.
Also, Tom has to deal with responsibikty again. Eating, going to the bathroom, homework, school. Maybe being tiny was better?
I can't wait for Tom to go meet Miss Harwood and Miss Addison. I want to see the looks on their faces. Especially Miss Harwood! I wonder if she will put him in detention.
My original plan for this story was to have Tom shrunk forever. But seeing how far this story has come and how many people look up to at as inspiration, I think a classic storybook feelgood ending would be nice.
Being normal and living life as a regular kid again shows that this was Tom's story of his adventure of being tiny.
By loose ends, I hope this means that Tom meets every giantess and grins at them knowing what they did to him. It's like they have their own secret that the rest of the world is oblivious to.
Well, this machine has no side effects, so we might as well use it every night to have some fun. Isn't that the dream? Deciding how to get kinky just got a whole lot more interesting.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad I was able to step outside your expectations and surprise you. Yep Tom is big again and you'll soon find out the machine is broken...
[Report This]Date: September 23 2016 6:32 AM Title: Zapped
An excellent blend of poignancy and medical plausibility (re: his post-enlargement reaction). But, I now have to wonder what's ahead for chapter 126? The re-shrinking of Grandpa Tom by Donatella? If only for a quick "auntie climax?"
Author's Response:
Nice! I've a couple of things up my sleeve still so don't ring the bell just yet :)