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Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 1:53 AM Title: Business Before Pleasure

She's not that good though, since she doesn't know Raphaella already found an alternative way to restore Tom. More to the point, it's pretty obvious Lina is using this as a cover to keep Tom, which will backfire once Raphaella mentions she has an alternative that won't require her to give up her rights as Tom's legal guardian. 



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She's struggling to try and gain the upper hand but feels her grasp slipping. Make no mistake, lina is brilliant, but she is running out of time...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2016 7:09 PM Title: Business Before Pleasure

Man! It's no wonder she's such a successful businesswoman. She's got a plausible-sounding answer for everything!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2016 4:55 PM Title: Business Before Pleasure

Wow, this is really happening. An end is in sight. I was wondering if restoration would be involved in this story, but I guess this answers me question.

Also, I thought this deal with Serena was just about custody. Turns out it was just for this temporary trip to take Tom to this Helena girl to be tested on.

I like how Lina just assumes that since Helena is pretty, that Tom would have a great time with Helena. (It's probably true.)

Duggernaut, you read my mind. By private moment, I was thinking pleasure, but then your chapter title was "business b4 pleasure" and I was thinking, "of course" haha!

Hopefully, by "reacquianted" it's not some foreword for another business thing. Maybe this time it's the intimate play we have been waiting for about 80 chapters.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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