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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2016 4:50 PM Title: Friday morning, Lindholm House, Discovery

Somehow, Hector, Addison doesn't strike me as the apologetic type.

Author's Response:

She was put in her place by Janine, which is more than likely the source of her silence

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2016 9:52 PM Title: Friday morning, Lindholm House, Discovery

Nice chapter, i do hope his mother arrives soon and she spends time with her son. Nothing sexual, just that i'm sure she's been worried sick.

 

Also, i'm sad Addison hasn't had a chance to apologize to Tom, like Jessica did.



Author's Response:

Don't count Addison out yet, I have a meeting coming up between her and Tom,...

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Date: September 01 2016 6:55 PM Title: Friday morning, Lindholm House, Discovery

OK! So, now, everyone has seen him. Serena, the lady lawyer, included. But, what about that sultry Russian babe, Tatiana? Was her inclusion simply (no Cold War pun intended) a red herring?

Author's Response:

I have something yet planned for our gorgeous little Russian doll, :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2016 6:15 PM Title: Friday morning, Lindholm House, Discovery

So many characters in the same room! So much tension and excitement.

I love how Lina just cruises in and just takes him for a private moment. By private moment, more like, intimate moment.

Serena needs to use her imagination. The more sophisticated someone is, the more likely they get shocked by tiny Tom. I wonder if Lina is convincing Tom to please Serena.

Hopefully, everyone leaves except Lina and Serena with Tom. Then we can see how Lina will use this experience to convince Serena to help her.

This is going to be great! I can't wait for the next chapter!

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