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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2016 7:23 PM Title: Thursday Night, Getting Dirty

"O" dear!

Seriously, though: will Cassidy realize what is happening in time? Or will Tom be rescued (most ironically) by Jessica?*

*If she's anything like her mother and sister, I wouldn't put it past her to have stalked Cassidy and/or Ms. Hardwood.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2016 5:47 PM Title: Thursday Night, Getting Dirty

Yay, you have returned! And wow, I forgot that this chapter was next! You blew me away once again!

One thing that stood out to me was the teasing that Katie did in the beginning. As it was getting Cassidy all excited, let's say I was also excited. The way Katie just pointed at Tom's destination made me smile. I love how she controls the situation.

Haha! Did it really take that long to know its a sex toy? I knew once Cassidy brought the black and pink box out. Of course it looks naughty, it's a dead giveaway. Tom should've seen that coming way earlier.

Ok Tom. If you were going to die, might as well be inside Miss Harwood's vagina while strapped onto Cassidy. It would be a great way to go.

Duggernaut, you mention "Wait" way too many times when Tom or some other character is about to get inserted when he doesn't want to. Maybe I just read too many of your stories, but it's always the same thing. At least change the word or something.

Please tell me that Cassidy and Katie have round 2 when Tom wakes up. Last thing we want is Tom waking up in the morning ready to go meet his mom.

Also, if he does wake up before the night is over, I think Tom should stay with Miss Harwood. Miss Harwood could either take him home with her and return him early morning, or Katie can stay over and she keeps Tom with her for the night.

A bit bummed that he blacked out. I don't want to see Cassidy and Katie get worried. I'm in love with their confidence and I don't want to see them break down. Otherwise, superb chapter!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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