Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2016 11:41 AM Title: Girls' Night

Foursome coming up? 5-sum with Katie? I feel like Tom. I feel like everyone is going to be smooching and getting intimiate at any second.

When Tess and Tom first spoke, there was a typo where Tom said "uh hi Tom".

I second what Carycomic said, while these dialogue heavy chapters are nice, they get repetitive since it is jus the usual chatter. Maybe it's because there was no cliffhanger.

Now that Janine and Tess know that Miss Harwood had fun with Tom, I wonder if they will question her and ask her what she did with Tom. Maybe they can share ideas!

I thought it was interesting how Tess just dropped Tom back on Janine's skirt after she finished talking to him. It's like Janine is where Tom belongs and Tess just puts him back there like its his natural habitat, on Janine.

So much build up for Raphaella. Is this really a big part of the story? Sure it does have the potential to end Tom's adventures, but we know that can't happen since this is Tom's story, not Raphaella's story. If it was her story instead, it would be her "rescuing" her son and keeping him safe for good. The end. Nah, in Tom's story, Tom gets fucked by all the women and it never ends. If he dies, he gets fucked in heaven too.

I doubt that Raphaella will keep Tom in her boob. She probably will get a container for him instead. Tess just said that to tease Tom.

Yoga night! Looks like next chapter should be called Girls night, not this one.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

No not a typo just Tom being facetious about the fact he wasn't asked about his condition. There is a sense of finality approaching for our tiny eponymous hero of the story and we shall have to allow it to unfold at its own pace. We shall see...